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Reviews for Mass Effect: The Hunt for Saren

By : fant32
  • From ANON - Revan on January 25, 2010
    This is a great Mass Effect story, I little bit of jumping here and there but that is alright however I do have one question what happen to Shiala? The asari that was on Feros.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr Dark on April 10, 2009
    dude this story is awesome, cant wait for the next chapter. i love how you get most of the storyline yet u dont focus on too much detail on the missions themselves
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  • From ANON - Anton on March 26, 2009
    This is really good! I'm a big fan of the game and it's good to see you doing it justice.
    Keep writing, can't wait for the next update.
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  • From 12snowman on November 12, 2008
    Great stuff I do hope the naxt does not take as long.
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  • From ANON - Pwedge on October 28, 2008
    Great mass effect fic. Extremely well written and I want more! Lol. Keep writing, can't wait to see more
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  • From cdog21 on October 23, 2008
    Interesting story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next because to be honest I hated this part of the game.
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  • From fant32 on September 29, 2008
    Good points Drunkasaurus Rex! I fixed some of the tense errors at the end of the previous chapter, and I'll give it another read through soon... As for the asari clones issue. It is a valid point, ALTHOUGH, scientifically speaking any non-sexual and non-hereditary reproduction is cloning. The Thorian could only make clones of asari since they are not the same species nor are they created through any hereditary system. That said, I did delete the erroneous uses of the word clone. Thanks for the reviews!
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  • From ANON - Drunkasaurus Rex on September 29, 2008
    It's pretty interesting to see someone write a story about the game. You switched tenses a couple times at the end in the Thorian's lair. Another thing that bothered me was John knew they were Asari Clones. I know in the game it tells you when you attack them, but he wouldn't know they were clones right away.

    Anyway, I enjoyed the story, but there were a few small things that annoyed me.
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  • From DarkWolves on September 28, 2008
    Great story. Keep going.
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  • From 12snowman on September 25, 2008
    Really good work.
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  • From ANON - CG on September 01, 2008
    Amazing fic! You're able to deliver well thought-out action sequences AND sex sequences. You've also managed to capture the crew's personalities dead-on, and is that a renegade Shepard I spy? Awesome! lol

    You've got a ways to go before the end, keep it up!

    As a last question: Are you planning to add the fact that Shepard seems to go out of his way to survey everything in sight? Or even going to add some of the better side-quests? Or is this strictly the Main Plot only?

    Either way, your writing is great. I'd love to see more chapters up.
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  • From ANON - Erik on August 29, 2008
    This is a well written story. You describe the interaction (both physical and spoken) between characters very well. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2008
    Awesome chapter why not make a threesome with shep/liara/ash.
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  • From elegyenigma on August 11, 2008
    Fuck yes, you updated! Awesome chapter, a little skimped-out on the details at points but, hey, that's what playing the game is for, right? Good jorb, keep up ze good vork. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2008
    Awesome story so far keep it up.
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