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Reviews for Crowded Elevator

By : insantics
  • From animelives2000 on June 07, 2010
    well i must say this story i picked random to read but now there my faorite pair
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  • From RequiemBelle on August 27, 2009
    YAY, an update! This is so exciting.

    Even if it takes another year, I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next one.
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  • From RequiemBelle on March 18, 2009
    Oh please oh please update this.
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  • From nejinee on December 28, 2008
    LOOOOOOVE love love love this story. Totally awesome plot and nicely constructed boys. :) Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From NikitaCheri111 on November 16, 2008
    Oh wow... just wow... This is absolutely amazing. Poor Hayner, poor poor Hayner. But Huzzah for Seifer. And Hayner says Seifer doesn't know him. tch, stubborn fool. This is a really great story. I love that you really incorporate the rest of the characters often times in fanfiction you have all the drama of your 2 MCs and everyone else is just so out of the loop. Very very well done. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From KarasKraehe on November 12, 2008
    awwww sifer is so sweet, i know what he was trying to do!!!
    i feel bad about mom, but i half expected it.

    NICE WORK
    keep writing
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  • From KarasKraehe on November 03, 2008
    Oh no! i dont want anything bad to happen to Hayner! i hope his mom is okay,
    buuut if he does break down maybe seifer could pick up the pecies????
    this story is really awesome, i'm not really one for angst normally, but you do it quite well my friend!

    Keep writing!!!
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  • From evelyn on August 31, 2008
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From RequiemBelle on July 26, 2008
    Oh, I've been following this story, seems like for a long time. I'm enjoying it immensely. PLEASE update soon! You're doing an excellent job of illustrating their dynamic. :)

    Also, YAY hydrocodone, YAY Vicodin. Man that stuff SAVED me after surgery! haha. Just had to throw that one in there.
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  • From emudii on July 23, 2008
    I had to read this twice before I could respond. To echo an earlier review, the pairing made me skip over this story a few times when I was on the prowl. Just didn't sound interesting at the time. But then you updated. And I figured: why the hell not? So I read it. And now I can't get it out of my system; I almost couldn't sleep last night. I can't believe I never realized before the sort of high tension dynamics these two have—but some things are so obvious, they're easily overlooked? What they have going is incredibly frustrating, but horribly hot.

    I feel for Hayner, because, ironically, I had the exact same... thing... going on with my childhood bully. He liked me. I liked him. He and I fought FOR YEARS. And everyone around us knew. But anytime someone tried to tell me, I would freak and lash out and insult him until I was blue in the face. I was just that scared that the moment I admitted it out loud, he was going to laugh, say it was all a joke, and hold it over me for the rest of my life. I'll probably always regret being such a wimp. I know Hayner is stronger than that. He just needs a little time to get his head on straight and lighten up a little. He's thinking too hard. Seifer is easy to jockey, as long as you know how to give as good as you get. ;)
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  • From NineTailedMistress on July 23, 2008
    I almost feel bad for Hayner, but then again he was a jerk which is what's holding me back from gushing over Hayner's dismay. I do feel really bad for Seifer though, Hayner was being such an ass... I'm curious though as to what Pence's reaction is going to be when he finds out that there is more between Hayner and Seifer than a simple love confession. Well, hope you update soon!
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  • From RandomChick on July 11, 2008
    I LOVE this story! Please, please, please update soon! Pwease?
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  • From on June 29, 2008
    m...
    i like it
    i like the originality in this story. Its pretty good.
    I hope you continue hun ^^
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  • From kordavamennemer on June 29, 2008
    X3 crud, that was a great place to finish off the chapter! haha-'cure-all'. that's funny :] osh, Seifer is so cute when he's telling his feelings. I hope that Hayner doesn't go to school again so that Seifer will visit, thanks for the update!

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  • From Demikkusu on May 06, 2008
    OMG MOAR PLZ. I want aftermath! Day after! "Howdy Chickenwuss, want more?" U NO! ^^ xD
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