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Reviews for The Bedroom Fight

By : AkumanoTsubasa
  • From ANON - Okori on October 04, 2008
    Hmm. I'll start off by saying that I rarely review anything unless I REALLY like it. I began reading in this fandom and was continually disappointed by others' representation of Nero. Yours however, I found 100% more convincing and for that, thank you. Also, Dante? Sounded just perfect, bravo. Overall, this was a fantastic (and delightfully dirty) read. I'm really hoping that you continue this particular story, maybe including Dante and Nero's future "encore" Or at the least, write more from this series. : )

    If your other story posted here is as good as this one (I'm starting it now) I'll have found another author to watch
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  • From Felixia on July 24, 2008
    I'm drooling.. and bleeding.. and I'm happy about that :D

    WRITE! And I'll bear your children ;)
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  • From Ultima on July 19, 2008
    Ha! Yes, that's exactly what I thought during the fight with Dante. "Wait a minute... this is a bedroom, right???"

    Nice work on writing this story. You have a good style, and I like how you slipped this scene right into the normal game sequence without disrupting anything in the continuity. This really could have been a deleted scene.

    Just one question... how could Nero and Kyrie have had regular sex before the game's events when she clearly had not seen his demonic arm until after the Credo fight during the game? It seems unlikely that he would be able to hide it during sex. I guess that's my only real criticism of the story. Other than that, rock on!


    - Jen
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  • From DFAmaeve on July 10, 2008
    Whew! I knew I wasn't the only one who got ideas when I saw those two in that room... I also had ideas when I saw the torture room in Fortuna Castle... but that's not important!(nervous laugh)
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  • From ANON - kate on July 04, 2008
    A couple of things conspire to make this one of the hottest slash stories I've read (in the top 10, easily). First of all, there are things done and mentioned in the course of some seriously *hawt* sex that are unique to this game and these characters. Too often, sex scenes can have the names switched out with some other fandom and no one would ever be able to tell. I also adore the "two sides of the story" bit. It thoroughly explores the whole, er, situation and alows those of us following at home to get a complete, er, grip on whatbs going on. Yum. :)
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on June 27, 2008
    OMG i love this story it is sooo FUCKING HOT!! oh and you should write your story about Dante/Nero/Vergil cause eww girls x.x
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  • From Demikkusu on May 23, 2008
    Holey fuckin' shit that was hot as hell. [/blood dripping down chin]

    Srsly man, that was great. I love the description, and the the.. THE SEX. And it was sooo not OOC like most of the Dante/Nero fics out there. Applause applause! ^^
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  • From Fawnheart on May 09, 2008
    Holy shit...I thought your Castlevania story was good, that's it, Im buying DMC now too! And to think I was always a die-hard WoW fan :P This is brilliant. Seriously, even better than your other one and that was pretty damn good. I loved the wit you injected into it, it was sexy as hell and from start to finish I was hooked, and I especially liked Dante's little twinges of guilt and the reasoning when he said/thought 'half demon' here hahaha I got a chuckle out of that. I hope you do make more of this one, Hooked here! Nice as!
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  • From Laryna6 on May 08, 2008
    You know, Trish is a shapeshifter, after all. So if you find writing het too strange, that's easily fixed.

    This fic is great!
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  • From ANON - amshin on May 04, 2008
    Nice read - I'm not really into Nero but your story is so good that I forgot I'm not supposed to like him ;) The second POV chapter is a fun addition.
    Anyway - no, you're not the only one who likes Credo. I also think he's an interesting (and good looking too! :D ) character with potential, so it's great that you're actually writing a fic with him :) I'm definitely looking forward to it.
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  • From MissViVi on April 29, 2008
    Okay, so you just HAVE to continue this series! I loved it, I really liked the two different POVs and overall your writing style is spot on. I think I found 2 or 3 grammar errors, but other than those you have one of the best writing techniques I've seen on this sight. My only suggestion for the future chapters is that you have another one with just Dante's viewpoint (he'd probably have a pretty interesting take on all this, lol!)
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  • From Samric on April 19, 2008
    Let me just tell you now that if you do a DantexNeroxVergil threesome with the same level of OMG-that-was-HOT that you wrote this one with, I will build a temple in your honor.
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  • From NecroQueen on April 15, 2008
    I really like this little gem you've supplied for us perverts here. I agree that there's not enough fun stuff written for this fandom. It seems a lot of the stories in this fandom get too serious or too fantastical (I love twincest, but the DantexVergil bit gets old after awhile). It's good to see Nero get some spotlight, without that popular view (based on an incorrect theory) of him being Vergil in some way. The fact that it's well written is a great plus. Your description of what was happening during the short period, physically and emotionally, created a great mental image, without bogging the mood down via excess language. I hope you keep writing for this pairing in the future.

    PS- I have nothing against Vergil fics (I read them too). It's just nice to see something else worth reading every once in awhile.
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  • From ANON - Lorena on April 14, 2008
    Nice and HOT!! I really like it!!! Dante/Nero is becoming one of my favourites yaoi couples, as much as Dante/Vergil... so, a Dante/Vergil/Nero sounds good (I really don't like Kyrie, at all...). Thanks for this fic, and please continue writing about D/N... (I can't find a lot of good written fanficcion about this couple yet)
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on April 14, 2008
    That was one of the hottest DMC fics I've ever read, I loved it!(Would love to read a Vergil/Dante/Nero threesome, or any other DMC stories you write.) I'll definitely keep an eye out for any more fics from you!^_^
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