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Reviews for Soul Urge II

By : Kamui
  • From MagusRonin on December 05, 2010
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great pairings and great story structure. I really liked your Yoshimitsu/Cassandra pairing, I thought it worked surprisingly well.

    My only sort of minor criticism was I found the presence of a few anachronisms to throw me out of the story just a little. bras and panties are inventions of the modern era; they're built into the soul caliber custom character design so very forgivable. The other anachronism was a drinking age for taverns in the late Middle Ages/early Renaissance, not terribly likely. Regardless the story was very enjoyable, I just thought I'd mention these in case you decide to write any other period pieces. Hell I enjoyed the story so much I finally registered with this community so I could tell you as much. :)
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  • From SlutWriter on September 12, 2008
    I just wanted to leave a review and say how well-done the matchmaking was in this story. In the case of each pairing, the author was able to convey a sense of degrading supplication between an idealized female warrior and one of Soul Calibur's many inhuman, monsterous characters. The end result is that I got to enjoy the idea of these sexy fighter girls shuddering and battling their own shame as all manner of undead, reptilian, alien, and golem tongues were shoved into their mouths for kisses that were, by any measure, obscene. These particular parts of the story, wherein the heroines find themselves in jeopardy and subjected to the sexual depredations of inhuman foes, were perfectly done. Even though they were all rescued, nothing can ever change the events that transpired. I don't care how happy Ivy is in her new life with Raphael and his adopted child, nothing can change the fact that she was once forced to choke on the dirty cum of her own undead father. Thumbs up!
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  • From hanyou007 on June 11, 2008
    Good to see your gonna do another chapter with Talim. Shes my favorite character to play with (cant wait for soul cal 4!!!) and i would have been sorely dissipointed if she was not given her time in the spotlight. Other than that though ive liked the story alot. A little too lovey dovey with taki and a bit ooc with Ivy but i can understand where you had to do it. I especially loved the chapter with sophitia and cassandra. Their is so few futa (dick-girl) stories out there and I love well written ones and have even put up two myself. Im even thinking of doing a soul cal one

    Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From NinjaGaijin on June 08, 2008
    Ah! So you have ended this story. For the later 2 parts, I don't exactly like your pairing Cass with Yoshimitsu, and Taki with Siegfried, but I won't dwell too much on that. I was also expecting a bitchier Cass... especially after your earlier comment on her. But if Charade gets to tentacle-rape her and Sophie turns into a dickgirl to bang her, I am satisfied. Your Mitsurugi-Taki battle/sex scene is great! Loved the aphrodisiac lipstick plot device, I might steal it for my own stories later LOL. Too bad Mitsurugi didn't get to realize his fantasy (making Taki his slave). Taki fucking Nightmare/Siegfried was okay, and the intense confrontation with Inferno was great. Too bad Siegfried intervened so quickly... I want to see the Soul Calibur phallus in action a bit longer.

    Anyway, hope you'll write more adult fanfics in the future.
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  • From tyrian2000 on June 06, 2008
    Did Nadia imply that there´s going to be a sequel?
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  • From omega13 on May 30, 2008
    You're concentrating on Soul Calibur II, so I'm guessing that Tira isn't going to be showing up.

    I was naturally unsure regarding the pairing of Cassandra/Yoshimitsu, but you made the masked ninja your own and everything seemed to work considering neither of them sink into the status quo. I haven't seen many successful pairing with Cassandra, the majority of them that I've seen usually involve unconnected characters like Siegfried. You made this work out very well.

    I'm not sure where you're going to be going with Talim, but I'm going to announce my support of the Link/Talim pairing that was everywhere on fanfiction sites following the release of SCII. I suppose it's because there isn't much age difference, their values seem to be quite similar and both are driven toward the greater good. Naturally, this is your story. No pressure.

    One more thing, could you just have Heihachi get frustrated with Spawn's nonsense and kick his ass.
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  • From Xelleon on May 21, 2008
    Great work so far. There are a few minor details I could complain about, but that would be nitpicking. Looking forward to the next chapter with dread and anticipation, since Cassandra is my favorite SC babe.
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  • From tyrian2000 on May 18, 2008
    not bad! definetively needs some kind of sophitia/cassandra threesome though


    and no lizardmen.
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  • From scythe899 on May 13, 2008
    Your story is pretty f@$#ing great so far. Please tell me your going to write a Yun-SeongxTalim chapter soon(if not next).
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  • From NinjaGaijin on April 27, 2008
    I CAME.

    With Soul Calibur reaching IV, there aren't many of us who still remember SCII, but to see this game revisited in adult fanfiction is clearly refreshing. Great scenes with Sophie, Lizardmen, and Nadia... I love how you mess up with Sophie's mind like that. Excellent take on Maxi's character. (Am a little bothered by the 'MILF' comment though, it's anachronistic). Looking forward to the next chapters!

    Sophitia done, who's next?

    Oh by the way, I know you're writing in the SCII timeline... but I'm entertaining the small chance of you getting SCIII ladies, Setsuka and Tira, involved in this story.
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  • From humanputting on April 26, 2008
    wonderfully written!!! cant wait to see what you have in store for the other girls especially my favorite taki. please show her no mercy!!!
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