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Reviews for The Long Weekend Away

By : neonabsinthe
  • From HappyDragon on October 05, 2008
    Mmmm, more details in this chapter, fun, fun! Oh, and thank you for the heads up in your opening notes.

    I'm glad that you're still working on this, because we need more angsty-fluff in our lives. . . . Okay, so really we just need more fluff, but still!

    This story is familiar, but different, and thus interesting. So I'm glad that I'll be one of the ones in for the long haul. ^_^
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  • From ANON - snow-bunnie on September 26, 2008
    i just read this through and its SOOOOO GOOD. the plot line is really interesting and the characters are so well written. but i don't like kairi, even though we're meant to sympathise with her. she just annoys me. but that could be the rikuxsora fangirl in me talking ^_^; anyway please update very very soon. i wanna know what happens next!!!
    x
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  • From ANON - Tall tree-san on September 25, 2008
    A new chappie YAY! Thank you so much I enjoyed it! Hope you update soon :)!!
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  • From ANON - eve4mem on September 25, 2008
    Aww I hope you update soon, I felt like I was waiting forever for this one. I really hate Yuffie, she's mean a you know what, Riku doesn't need friends like that especially know that Sora's with him. Poor Sore he seems to be pushed into the background, I mean he's a part of Riku's life you think he'd have more input. Maybe it'll pick up later. Great fic, I'll keep an eye out for more.
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  • From konekohoshi on July 16, 2008
    I love this story so far!
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  • From ANON - blue bean on July 12, 2008
    you updated! thank god because i wasn't sure if you were going to continue with this story or not. and its getting so much more exciting.
    keep those chapters coming
    xoxo
    bb
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  • From FayeV on July 08, 2008
    OMG!! I'm loving it...& i just wove Sora!! I know Yuffie's hurt but she's still being a bitch! It's like she's trying to stir up things or something! Sending Kairi that text and taking it out on Sora like he stole Riku away or something...bitch...Loving Riku, Sora, Selphie, & Tidus though! Wakka's ok...i guess...a little 2 blunt to me...and I guess Leon and Kairi are just hurting...but yes, Yuffie's a bitch!! Loving the story though, update soon!!!!
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  • From HappyDragon on July 07, 2008
    Oh Wow! I was afraid you had let such a cute little fiction die. And that would have been a crying shame. Ah, but enough of that, now to reread the 1st 2 chapters, and then to start in on the newest one!

    ::Start note::

    . . Hmmm . . I got that as of last chapter, so they all seem perfectly fine to me--with the way they are acting. I also know that as the story goes on, and everyone comes to terms with what’s happened that we will get to see more sides of them. So you have my sympathy, because I’m behind you on their acting out of anger from being hurt and confused and slightly happy that he’s back.

    Oh! That’s one thing I should have mentioned . . You have a tendency to switch between past and present tense as you are writing, which is a not-so-good thing. Basically if you start in one, you finish the thought in it. So if you start a story in one, outside of certain dramatic effects, you stay in that one. . . . and since most stories are written in the past tense . . . .

    ::Reads Chapter::

    . . . . Ack, still not much to say . . . I do like the implications you have going on . . . . the thing with Riku’s family. . . . Kairi’s reaction . . . .

    Grr, I might have to lurk for a few chapters in order to build up enough to actually say something useful, sorry.

    But you should still keep going with this! Good Luck, and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - fanboi of legendary fics on May 27, 2008
    holy archangel! im FULLY and COMPLETELY HOOKED on your simply BEAUTIFUL story your definetly on my LEGENDARY list!!!can't wait for more OUTSTANDING work.PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Spinner on May 20, 2008
    awesome! it's turning out to be really cool! your doing extremely well for a first fic. It seems very original idea wise, i don't think I've ever read another like it and I really frequent the fan fic archives L*
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  • From ANON - Asuka on May 19, 2008
    xD omg. that was nerve recking for Sora.
    and Riku's idea of telling them that? sure didn't go very smoothy. can't wait to read more. update soon!

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2008
    Uh, oops?

    XD

    This is wicked awesome! Incredibly well written, I'm dying to see more! Can you email me when you update? I cannot wait for the next chapter *rocks back and forth* Ahhh, what's going to happen?!

    mizu-benten@hotmail.com
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  • From losthimagain on May 17, 2008
    Interesting. I'd like to see where you go with this! Please update soon!
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  • From HappyDragon on May 17, 2008
    I'z too tired to gives full review (or use proper grammers), but Iz incuregin' youz to continues with teh story. There are much with the potential here, and you haven't gone quite into woman ashin' yet, but that will all depend on teh overall reactions of Kairi and Yuffie, for Selphie seems teh most agreeable thus far. . . . Which is odd, and yet not, becuase she's a 50/50 chance of being a bitch or a hero in these kinds of stories.

    Good luckz. Will b back. . . . .

    ::Falls over asleep.::
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  • From FayeV on May 17, 2008
    That was really good! Poor Riku...his friends are being pricks. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!!
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