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Reviews for Empezar

By : ghastly
  • From brainfear on November 03, 2010
    Gah! I guess you're not updating this from the looks of it. That's a shame. :'(

    ch3
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  • From Fawnheart on September 07, 2008
    haha yay! You updated! If that's crap writing, then I can't wait until my writing is so crappy :P God that was good! I love your one line things hehe and how cool are the Forsaken? Really, I mean I love orcs but I'd play a forsaken, they are brilliant and I love Jhekyl. EXactly how I'd imagine one to be. Brilliant Ghastly, can't wait for more! (I want some of that soap lol)
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  • From RagingPaladin on September 07, 2008
    Ees true; about the Night Elf poosee.

    And of course about most paladins being hung.

    And I liked this because I hate rogues....
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  • From Fawnheart on May 23, 2008
    Actually, no that wasn't from a chick's pov was it? It was a perfect blend of both ...k, shutting up now....wiping drool from chin. Seriously, well done.
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  • From Fawnheart on May 23, 2008
    Holy shit...wow.

    hahaha! Maybe I should go and have a cigarette and de-caf before I review this one so I don't make a complete dickhead of myself? Far out. Ok... I LOVE the way you write, I love the phrases like how she loved it 'when they bottom out', 'ten inches of thick, fat meat'....um...all I'm going to say about that is how fucking raw and hot those two lines are. I mean the whole thing was perfect but those two especially stood out to my mind...'his eyes rolled back to say hello to his brain'...LOVE THAT!

    Look, I have absolutely no idea where you got the notion that you can't write sex scenes, and you did that from a chicks POV and as a chick, I think I can safely say that...holy shit...that. was. hot.

    EASILY one of the best M/F smut scenes I have ever read, if not 'the' best. No joke.

    ...and yeah, let's PVP! I love pvp, it really pisses me off when I lose all the time, I must be a masochist and thanks for the nice things you say, flattery will get you everywhere hahaha :P

    I'm stoked that you are going to blend the two stories together, I loved the last one. So I'll leave it at that so I don't absolutely gush my head off and make a whopping great fool of myself. hehe! Bloody well lovely. Can NOT wait for more! Next time don't lull us into a false sense of security though by saying you can't write sex scenes. Give us warning, something like "Batten down the hatches cos I'm going to blow your minds" will suffice lol.
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  • From wanderingaddict on May 22, 2008
    wow, fat, blue, troll cock. that was cool. I hope to see more of these two, it seems like they'd have ome great interactions ahead of them.
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  • From Fawnheart on May 19, 2008
    hahaha, as usual, another beauty! My favourite parts are where you portray their weapons as living things! That is so cool, on par with the Tauren shaman and the elemental spirits. And you are the only person I have seen who can make taurens interesting. I can't wait to see what happens with your cheeky troll and staunch chicki warrior. Brilliant as usual but you aren't going on with the other story? that was sooo good. I hope you find somewhere to put in the part where the water thanks the shaman in this new story, I really, really loved that bit, and the bit where Elune materialised. Anyway, glad to see you are still at it and this new story is every bit as engaging as the others, I love it! :D

    P.S...what server *are* you on? hehe, only joking, I won't do that to you, mainly because I rarely get time to play myself anymore lol. *Waits impatiently for another update!*

    Looking forward to more :D
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