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Reviews for Heatwave

By : DawnIgnited
  • From Fawnheart on May 28, 2008
    haha! That was sooo good! I remember doing those quests in strangle thorn, how much does it suck finding those bloody panthers? Unless you have a hunter with you, you just have to run around until you agro one and you find out just how crappy your gear really is pretty quickly. I especially loved the references to bottled 'troll sweat' and the 'pelt quest', they annoyed the crap out of me, so many of them and they are worth bugger all lol. Just brilliant. this is easily the best story I have read that mixes elements of the game in with the smut...which was bloody good too (mmmm, Tauren tongue!). And uh oh, I feel a troll obsession coming on after reading this and 'Empezar', Ghastly already made me see Tauren's in a different light with the first version of that story hehe.

    I loved it. I hope you write more cos I'll be looking forward to it!
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  • From wanderingaddict on May 28, 2008
    wow! I never really thought of taurens as that attractive before, but this fic really turned me around on that! thier interaction was cute, and the sex-scene hot. really hot. the copius amounts of semen spilling out all over everything was something else, it really was. I loved it!

    if you're looking for response in regards to, well, the writing and the structure of the story itself, I'd say the only part lacking was near the end of the story, right after Aeiko crams himself inside Hisahi (great names, by the way!). He pushes in, and then you simply tell us there's thursting and stuff rather than showing us. I think that (if you feel like fine-tuning this a little) a few extra lines near the end there to not make the climax seem so rushed (and I'm talking in a... sense of brevity here. it could be you were going for "they're both so pent up it was fast," but I think you could keep that sense of quickness and still flesh it out a little. that's only if you were looking for that kind of feedback tohugh. I thought it was a very well-done little story, a fun, sexy read that's made rethink a few of my views on tauren. I hope you keep writing, this was fun to read!
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