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Reviews for KotOR I: Orin Dakall

By : Banter
  • From yoshidoce on August 17, 2008
    Carth gonna get some tang.

    Mission and Zalbaar! EWWWWWWWWWWWW!

    I must say I just reread KOTOR for the first time and through 7 chapters Spelling and Grammer are not that good on my part. Thank god that gets better.


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  • From yoshidoce on August 13, 2008
    nice. I liked the calm. Need to juice it up a bit again before you get off Taris though. The last two chapters are lacking action, alcohol, spice, and/or sex.
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  • From ShadowsRun on August 13, 2008
    Hmmm Orin must be settling down if she didn't just deck Carth when he told to not threaten innocent people. I'd still wanna deck him...
    It was funny that they went back without Orin when she stopped to talk to Bendak. Heh. Also, calling Carth floppy head made me laugh. It was interesting to see how Carth interacted with Janice, and how both Orin and Bastila were irritated. Heh. T3 is all cute in this chappie too, which is something I didn't think possible.
    Awesome, keep up the good work. Glad your compy is up and running again.

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  • From defoit on August 12, 2008
    You, sir, are like some kind of story-writing GOD. This is extremely awesome. Don't worry about taking a while, as long as we keep getting stories as good as this, your fans don't mind if you take a week or two to write a chapter.
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  • From yoshidoce on August 11, 2008
    I just skip all unimportant jargon and events. Feel free to review. I think you should have Bastila tied up spread eagle and that little pussy ripped apart. I mean, she REALLY needs it to loosen up. That or gotten really spiced up or drunk. I say all 3.
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  • From yoshidoce on August 04, 2008
    Mission needs held down and gang fucked by some sith. Bastila needs raped by someone...unruley. My story is "KotOR: Time to Play The Game".
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  • From yoshidoce on July 30, 2008
    Now. I really like this and I'm glad you aren't resigning to let Bastila get her own way. I wish there was an alert system on this site like on ff.net. If you are interested I have a KotOR story on ff.net that you may like.
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  • From RyuaAlba on July 30, 2008
    Wheee! I'm glad you liked Solace. I had much fun with it. And I'm thrilled that this story is still active! Seriously active to boot! Good luck with your new computer!
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  • From yoshidoce on July 27, 2008
    oy. She gets shot and Bastila doesn't give a crap. Nice. When does Mission get fucked?
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  • From ShadowsRun on July 23, 2008
    Hey, no need to apologize at all. Worth waiting for. So don't worry about apologizing. I'm glad your compy situation is cleared up. Awesome chappies. Leave it to Bastila to harass someone who just got shot in the back. Oye.
    Good luck, and don't worry about late or short chapters. They're all good anyway, so I'm happy to wait so you can do them right.
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  • From RyuaAlba on July 20, 2008
    Ack! So cool! I was all disappointed when I caught up to the final chapter... I am enjoying this muchly. I like how she has dark tendancies, but isn't totally evil.
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  • From AletaRois on July 20, 2008
    I'm glad that everything is alright. I was starting to wonder...
    Again, don't rush it. You've done wonderfully so far. :)
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  • From ShadowsRun on July 15, 2008
    I laughed pretty heartily when she called Canderous Candy. Lols. Also, I laughed pretty hard when Orin grabbed Mission and asked why her veggies were drugged. Oh my. That's pretty funny. Always knew Zelka was up to somethin. It was very cute and heart warming that Carth left to rough Matrix up. Oye. It took me a while to make that connection. It was kind of Orin to throw the boot at Bastila's legs, not face...
    It's an interesting aspect to have Carth wondering whether all Sith are evil, or just people. Verry interesting...
    Awesome chappies. Good luck with your compy, life and writers block troubles.
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  • From yoshidoce on July 14, 2008
    I hope they don't leave Mission.
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  • From yoshidoce on July 14, 2008
    You're right, this was a long night.

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