Click Here!

Reviews for KotOR I: Orin Dakall

By : Banter
  • From ANON - Kyle Kyrullium on August 26, 2015
    Suc'Cuy?
    Wow.
    Si this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Not just in KOTOR, but in any fandom. I was really bummed out when i got to the last chapter only to discover that it had been abandoned. I write now to beg and plead that you come back, and to bribe you with cookies to finish the story. And to then write a KOTOR II one as well. Please?.....pretty please with whipped cream and bo stinkin cherries on top....screw cherries. Anyway, im gonna assume that you probably won't even get this review, but i nust felt like on the off chance that it might have an impact i had to write it. Hope to hear back from you, please email your response. I dont know if itll post my email to you or not but its samuelleissatgmaildotcom

    Kaysh meg miit'gaana, oyacyi
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gorguts5 on April 12, 2014
    So what happened? Lost interest or moved on to brighter things, shame really was fun reading this.
    Report Review

  • From marquetta on November 23, 2010
    I know this is a deadfic, but I still check it occasionally in case of miracles. It's a great story. It's a shame it's not posted on ff.net; more people would've had a chance to enjoy it.
    I don't even like Carth. I suppose that's why it's so much fun to watch Orin needle him.
    Report Review

  • From TheOddLittleTurtle on November 29, 2009
    Very cool. Looking forward to the next update.
    Report Review

  • From EddieTheLightbringer on October 07, 2009
    It's been a long time since I last saw this section, kinda glad I did because it gave me that much more backlog to read. This, thus far, has been absolutely hilarious. I love your portrayal of the main character. The little bits you've added in, small, subtle details, they add in a world of depth to the story. I originally started reading, looking for the sex.... but then I just started having too much fun reading everything else. Keep it up, and good luck getting your over-hyped Mac to work properly. =)
    Report Review

  • From TheLadyQuinn on June 28, 2009
    Orin is the best Revan I've seen on here. I'm glad you posted her :) Good luck with updating again soon!
    Report Review

  • From ShadowsRun on June 05, 2009
    "Because you know what having a vagina feels like?"
    LOLS. I might've reviewed some chapters twice and others not at all, in hindsight. Also, this chapter ish amazing. And you should continue on. Is Carth going to get laid? With the Twi'lik? Will she teach him things? How to be good in bed? Squeeee.
    Report Review

  • From ShadowsRun on June 05, 2009
    Hehe. Where she complains about no one being good with repairs. Good stuff. Also, T3 is super cute with his greeting and such. The mini confrontation with Carth and Orin was hot. It needs to happen. They should have a fist fight or something, so muchhh tension. They need angry shmeeex. Also there isn't enough Carth Revan smex in this world. Also, the comment about a grease smudged girl and Carth forgetting himself made me laugh.
    Report Review

  • From ShadowsRun on June 05, 2009
    Lols. "I’m doomed to a normal existence, including sex and emotional outbursts whenever I like? Gee, darn. Just be glad I’m “sensitive”, or I couldn’t have rescued you." Ahhh I love Orin. I like that you depart a bit from the game text and give it flare, like how a normal person/ex dark lord would talk.
    Also, all the warnings tacked onto your fic, are they mostly tied to the past, where we've seen, or will there be more in the upcoming chapters? Or is it going to be vanilla? Just curious, no need to answer though.
    Report Review

  • From ShadowsRun on June 05, 2009
    Long time no see. Sorry I kinda feel behind here. My lappy had some, issues oye. Anyhoo, I am still thoroughly enjoying your story. Meeting Canderous made me laugh, and how she has some, interesting, memories, also, Bastila is a total prat. Allll very good.
    Report Review

  • From Moomus78 on March 09, 2009
    I just found your story, please don't tell me you quit! It's so good!
    Report Review

  • From RyuaAlba on December 27, 2008
    Ahhh, Carth... looking for solace in the arms of the pretty Twi'lek mechanic. You KNOW that's gonna end badly.
    Report Review

  • From mikomimaru on December 12, 2008
    XD I love this story! Poor Petey, he died far too soon. At least Orin will get her orignal killing machine back and has as good humour as she does! :D I totally love your story, though right now I want to hit Bastila upside the head with something but I imagine alot of people do too. I like your characterization of Mr. Onasi there, and that you're using both original dialogue and your own personal dialogue. I hope you continue this story, as it seems interesting and I wonder if Orin's dreams are going to continue to effect Carth and I like that he went to beat the crap out of the guy that tortured poor Orin. How long was she a Smuggler after the Jedi brainwashed her?
    Report Review

  • From yoshidoce on November 08, 2008
    ha! Carth is going to get laid. Mission have a wet dream?
    Report Review

  • From RyuaAlba on August 21, 2008
    Why Carth... horny little emo soldier that he is.... Hah. I acutally really like the way you portray him in this, which is rare for me. I like the way you portray everyone for that matter... although I'm hoping T3 gets a little more limelight as the story goes. He's a cool little droid. Gets cooler in the second game, but he's still cool in the first.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!