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By : amskitty214
  • From ANON - Sarah on September 10, 2011
    are you ever going to update this wonderful story please oh please update i wanna know if demy is sick please
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  • From Phyrephreak2008 on January 02, 2010
    i am hoping you havent forgotten about this story ps my name is sarah this is a great story i love Zexion/Luxord and Xigbar/demyx but why oh why did you make him get the aids well at least i hope you didnt i was just hoping for mpreg but thats just my sick and twisted mind just saying so i thank you for writing this story but i hope that you continue it an ps Loz good match for marly thanks a bunch for writing this

    a huge fan named sarah
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  • From ANON - Akaku on April 15, 2009
    omg. I love the way u guys write. I rly couldnt stop reading it. Cant wait 4 the next chapter. I love the plot twists and i love the fact that Riku is a bad guy 4 once. It makes a story more interesting!!! And the different pairings they are new to me. I almost never see those pairings together except for the Axel/Roxas pairing.
    God Yoai is always soo much fun!!!
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  • From KagomeXHime on August 25, 2008
    I absolutly love your story, the balance between the couples goes well as you throw in the twists.

    I can't help but sit there at the end of chapter nine going. "Damn it... No Xemnas & Saix...". *twitchs* I can't wait for the next chappy, and hopefully some XemSaix. -.-' sorry, I'm obsessed with that couple. XD

    Anyway, great job so far!!
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  • From sinyeta on August 06, 2008
    Moremoremore.....pleeeeaaase? I've been reading this in private....every bloody day. MOREMOREMORE! Riku's a bitch.....and it would seem he is Xemnas' now......*gigglefit* Please post more, this is bloody amazing!
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  • From ANON - snoo on August 01, 2008
    Oh! I'm really glad that Axel finally got to kick Rikus ass! 8D 'Cause I have to say that I hate this kind of Riku. >.<
    Anyway, I'm glad that you wrote some continue. n_n And I look forward to read some more. :D
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  • From ANON - Maggie on July 31, 2008
    Quite the fantastic piece of fanfiction you've got here. While I come here for the smut more than the story, I do enjoy the plot here. Very well written, with a well developed plot. Keep up the good work (roughly translate to, please write more!!)
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  • From AloneintheOpen on July 28, 2008
    First of all, let me say that the story is pretty good, its fun, nice, and rare of its kind. A story that is not too serious so you can enjoy it, but not plotless crap thats filled with random events that only sort of appear to connect. Good job on that one. However, I'm not sure about the AIDS thing. I mean, would she really figure that out so soon? Also I feel that it probably would have been more realistic if he showed no symptoms then just one day randomly passed out and such. Drug user or not, AIDS is almost never the first assumption when a person gets sick. Alas, I'm very interested to see what happens next. I'm not sure if I can deal with Riku being the bad guy, but then again I did play the game.
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  • From ANON - Bbritishchik on July 28, 2008
    Yay, another update! This one was great and full of drama. Omg, poor Demy. I hope he doesn't end up getting AIDS. That would make me sad. I'm so glad we finally get to see Saix and Xemnas, squee. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From OrochiGreel on July 28, 2008
    Stupid Riku! Letting himself get fucked by Xenmas just so he can get Xenmas to fire Leon as a 'favor' just because Leon comforted Sora after he hit him! Riku doesn't deserve to call Sora, his! Sora would be better off with Leon then a evil-bitchy two-timeing filthy whore like that bastard Riku! Plus, calling Riku a whore is a inselt to other whores everywhere.
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  • From inuyashalove04 on July 28, 2008
    Hey! I just found your story and read all of the chapters tonight. I love it! I like how you're slowly pulling everyone into the story. I just don't like what's going on with Demy. I can see adding a little drama to keep it interesting, but don't kill him off; please? I'd be sad if Demy wasn't around anymore. Oh, and I really liked the fight between Axel and Riku. The 'someone has a crush on you' line made me laugh, because I knew what was coming. And sure enough, Rikus down on the ground the next minute. Oh and Leons problems are just starting too...I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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  • From spikesandpins on July 28, 2008
    Hey, me again. Sorry for not reviewing lately. Sometimes real life sucks..... Anyways good work as usual guys. When the aids thing popped up my eyes were as wide as saucers I swear. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Parker Rowe
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  • From ANON - Micky on July 28, 2008
    ::muches on a strawberry:: DOOD. WAH. I swear, the smile never once left my lips while I was reading this xDD so goooood~ and that little part at the beginning made me extra happy xD poor little Demy DDD: wtf, man. Drugs are bad. Don't use other people's hypodermic needles, Demyx! You should know that. Marluxia makes me giggle x3 he's such a bitchy girl. I love it so much xD I'm reeeeeally happy that Riku finally got his ass beat :DD it's about damn time, jeez xD I approve though. Axel did a very good job. Then he had to go running his mouth T3T DrunkSora always makes me happy :3 I particularly really enjoyed the line "I fugged up." xDD it just sounds so adorable~ GOD THESE STRAWBERRIES ARE AMAZING. Anyways, uh... oh, right. I WAS SO RIGHT BAHAHAHA. I get a fucking gold star for that. Riku is such a filthy whore. I like how they tried to maintain a conversation while sexing though xD I hope Leon doesn't get too fucked over D: he's already too emo for his own good. I crave more Lux and Zexy now xDD I'm never satisfied, I'm sorry T_T ::curls into a ball with her strawberries:: this was really just sooo gooood though :DD I love your story all the way to space. And that's a long fucking way, man D: google that shit. ANYWAYS, hope you liked this rantfest :3 well, I didn't really stray too far from the story... xD next time. Next time. And get some damn inspiration, Alex! XDD go buy some off eBay or something, jebus. Amazing job though, as always ^^ your story makes me so happy~ can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lia on July 27, 2008
    Amazing chapter, I was wondering when Xemnas and Saix were going to make their appearance in this wonderful tale. :) I love your whole tell you've spun thus far and look forward to some more amazing chapters.
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  • From ANON - Lia on July 27, 2008
    I love this fanfiction, it's currently one I search a lot when I get a chance to look at this site. :) Keep up the good job.
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