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By : amskitty214
  • From ANON - Micky on July 18, 2008
    HOT DAMN, YOO GAIZ. O3O HOT. FUCKING. DAMN. I'm falling so desperately in love with this story and all the characters in it. x3 You give them all such fiery and unique personalities, it's amazing. I almost fell off my couch when I read about Marly's outfit. xD That is so completely like him. God, your story makes me want t draw so bad. D: I want to draw Marly with a hot pink dress and fishnet. x3 maybe I'll draw him reaching down to take his shoe off and Loz has the other one in his hand, looking all cute and embarassed. >D And drunk Sora makes me giggle. He's such a little lightweight :3 But then again, so am I >__>;; I can't drink more than a swig of sake without falling very gracefully over my own feet. I'm fun to watch though xD I really love the Leon/Sora pairing so much. It's so rare @__@ and you do them remarkable justice. You should keep Leon around for a little bit ;D He needs to have a little chat with Riku, after all. You guys are just making me love every single character so much x3 Loz is so adorable and insecure. He's such a big teddy bear. And "Wild Rose"? Hot damn. Marluxia was a bigger whore than I ever thought possible! In the good way, though... if that's at all possible. I love how awkward they are together ^^ They make such a very cute couple. I can't wait to see how they progress in their relationship. ::dons a netted hat and hides in a shrub:: I should start keeping a log. ::tags Loz and Marluxia:: *Australian accent* What interesting creatures, these... "homosexuals". You see how the pink-haired woman... man... WELL, you see how [s]he touches his/her hand to the larger male? So intriguing! I must study them further. *Not Austalian accent* xD I'm sorry. I'm very slap happy and watching Stephen Lynch. It's not my fault, I swear! Anyways, hope you liked my rant! They seem to be getting progressively longer @__@ hope you don't mind ;D Keep up the amazing work, you guys. This is really such an inspiring and original story, it makes me want to cry ; A ; This made my whole week, btw xD For real. So sankyuu~ Much love ^^
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  • From ANON - Daylyn on July 13, 2008
    This is great yall! (yes i'm from down south lol) but in chapter 2 i think it is you have axel and roxas talkin but when they go for a kiss you put axel and sora. Just thought yall should know. Kepp up the great writin though.
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  • From ANON - queenaoshi on July 12, 2008
    What!?! Easy target for what? I'm frightened for everyone Riku's around now. What's going on? I'm scared! T^T
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  • From ANON - Micky on July 11, 2008
    HALLO?! O3O Wow you guys... just... wow xD IN THE GOOD WAY, DUN WORRY. Definately worth the wait, for sure. ^^ GOD you guys totally made me want to jump Luxord's junk @__@ I NEVER EVEN LIKED THE DUDE AND LOOK WHAT YOU DID ;A; You've created a monster, I hope you know. xD And Zexion is just so beyond cute, as per usual, so no surprise there. Haha I love Marly! x3 Of course he wouldn't care if a teacher was pedo'ing some kid. Is Marluxia gonna play a big part of the story later on?! :O Or is he just for the army of fangirl's entertainment? XD WTF RIKU ::HEADDESK:: AHH. >:[ What a filthy asshole jerkface. Axel needs to be his ass a few feet into the ground. OR BETTER YET, LET SORA DO IT. ::hops up and down:: Riku needs to be taken down a few pegs. AND I KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON THERE... well actually, I think everyone does. xD I think you'd have to be braindead to not pick it up >__>;; UHHHH anyways. I love stoner Demyx. xD you know, now that I think about it, he always kind of acted like a stoner... DANCE WATER, DANCE. ::throws a cup of water across the room:: o3o;; Well that didn't work. xD; And ohhh Ziggy-poo :3 you're so dirty ;] I'm glad you wrote more Zexy/Lexy smextime :D I was having violent yaoi withdrawls, and that's NEVER fun 8D I couldn't sleep, I was shaky and agitated >__>;; ::foams at the mouth:: WELP, I'm ranting again, it seems. Oops? xD I know you guys love it and I wanted to make an uber-spiffy review to say thanks for the smex I wanted. ^^ Amazing, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! ::toddles away::
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  • From Froggy941 on July 02, 2008
    Hold on a sec while i pick m jaw up from the floor..................

    Abosultely drop dead amazing! I'm really enjoying your work you guys :) I can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Bbritishchik on June 30, 2008
    Yay! I'm so glad to read another chapter. I always look forward to seeing this story updated. I love how you ya'll are writing it and I adore all of the pairings...well the Zex/Lux one I'm still getting used to, but its all good. ;) Can't wait to see a little Xem/Sai action too! Byes!
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  • From on June 29, 2008
    nice *nod nod*
    LET THE KINKY BUTT SHMEZZEHS ENSUE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bbritishchik on June 25, 2008
    Holy monkey! Hawt! Great chapter. As per usual, can't wait for next chapter, lol. Loving the speedy updates. ;)
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  • From ButterflySoup on June 25, 2008
    I like it. Angsty and sexy with a semi-original plot. By-the-buy, I get the feeling you've never smoked pot before? There is so much coughing involved, and smoking it from a joint for a first timer would be loud. Trust me. At least you didn’t have them do the apple bong thing, like some of my friends do, even though it taste a lot better. Plus, you cannot hide the smell. I think it so would have been obvious what he was doing in the closet with Demyx. But, stoner Demyx is a nice touch.
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  • From spikesandpins on June 24, 2008
    Nice with the truth or dare guys, but (don't kill me) it had so many possibilities that you gave up on! You could have had people come over or made it last longer and built up to the incest kiss thing a little more..... But keep up the good work guys!! Looking forward for the next chapter.

    Parker Rowe
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  • From spikesandpins on June 21, 2008
    Really nice, just as the rest is. I got a shout out! I feel so special...... Keep up the good work guys. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Parker Rowe
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  • From ANON - Azriel on June 21, 2008
    That was wonderful! Very well written, and it doesn't have that cliche high school story feeling.
    Can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Bbritishchik on June 21, 2008
    Yay, another chapter! I love how quick your updates are. Its nice not to have to wait months for one short chapter like some people. Anyways, This had just the right amount of angst to keep up the interest level, lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh, and don't worry, I love the Demyx/Xigbar pairing myself. Your not alone! LOL. ;)
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  • From spikesandpins on June 18, 2008
    Hey, you guys are doing really, really good. Keep it up ok?
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  • From ANON - queenaoshi on June 17, 2008
    That was amazing! I really enjoy stories with the Xigbar/ Demyx pairing, so I can't wait for that! I was kinda sceptical about the Luxord /Zexion, but that was hot. I can't wait to read more!
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