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Reviews for Snapshots: Photojournal

By : AoiNikko
  • From angrymuffin on June 29, 2008
    Everything's just so fluffy and cute, and if I were around with my camera I don't think either of them would be getting any sleep. XD I really like your writing style, and the third story was amazing. I don't normally like reading first person, but you pulled it off so well. ^^

    Hope to see more from you later on.
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  • From Sammei on June 27, 2008
    Uh, I'm sorry, but I'm kind of curious - how has the people spoken to make you want to delete your stuff? ^_^; I was one of the reviews, and I reviewed things positively, and so did the other person, as far as I can tell... Well, in any case, that's your decision.

    I did like the second ramble (breakfast) better than this last one. The breakfast one had this really great warm, homey feel that occurs in relationships. It was really sweet. You can see how Leon feels awkward about some things, but you can also tell how much he cares about Cloud, and vice versa.

    This latest ramble did feel a bit rushed, and (just trying to be constructive here, I swear) it seems that first person writing isn't really a strong point. But like you said, it's all for fun and practice, anyway, right?

    In any case, I enjoyed them. I'd say I'm looking forward to your next update, but, uh, I guess that isn't going to happen. ^_^:
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  • From Sammei on June 25, 2008
    Poor Cloud.. XD Great job on this, though! You can really feel both Cloud and Leon's frustrations. I also adored Snapshots, so I'm looking forward to seeing what else you do with this!
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  • From frostbite02 on June 25, 2008
    *hug* oh Cloud-kun I'm so sorry that you can't sleep...*nuzzles* tis okay. I like it, considering I just finished snapshots and that was great too! good job ^^
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