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Reviews for Kingdom for a Heart

By : BlueRose22
  • From HappyDragon on July 02, 2008
    This is . . . . . . . . . .

    different.

    Different isn't bad. Not knowing characters is.

    I liked the ending, it was very strong, and seemed more in keeping with the characters as we knew them.

    The problem is you didn't convince me about Sora acting the way he did for the story. And Riku's initial reacting was odd too . . . . I know you said AU/AR in the warnings but . . . . . .

    I just couldn't buy into it.

    Now when you got to them talking again, that was good, and believable for me. The interaction between Cloud and Arieth was wonderful, although I would have liked to have some hints earlier that she was the mom.

    Outside of the rocky start . . . that I'm not sure how you could improve upon, so I'm sorry I can't offer any advice . . . . I'm intrigued by how this chapter ended. I actually like the idea of Riku having to work his way back into Sora's good graces as they are dating.

    If I could ever think of half-way decent pointers I'll be sure to review with them. I'm just sorry I couldn't be very helpful right now. ~.~;;;
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  • From on July 02, 2008
    you nna coninue?
    i love it
    awesome!
    the homo pat almost made meh cry!
    meanie riku!
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