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Reviews for Hell's Bitch

By : Satyr
  • From ColdBloodBlazing on September 26, 2018

    Great story. After all, Imps need love too


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  • From bloodravyn on July 29, 2011
    update!
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  • From ANON - Interested individual on March 30, 2011
    It seems to me that you've abandoned this fic, leaving the rather promising cliffhanger as a f*cking tease for a fourth chapter thas may never come.

    Allow me to take it off your hands, adopt it if you will. The original three chapter will, aside fron a spell-check, remain as you left yhem, unaltered. The fourth will be of my own design, as will future chapters.

    You will still maintain original ownership, and will thus be able to direct me in the path you wanted this fic to turn up in, or, still maintaining ownership, you can let me sinply come up with a plot of my own that may lead to dozens of sex-rich chapters.

    I do hope you agree, so i can give the people a rather overdue chapter, but in the end, it is your decision.
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  • From ANON - A492 on April 20, 2009
    I see what you did there.

    Very nice, very hot. I look forward to reading the rest of this.
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  • From yeah11 on April 15, 2009
    I don't know what it is about the idea of a female imp that I find so irresistible...
    Anyway, I really liked the story so far, with perhaps one exception. Isn't the imp just a little bit too nice? I mean sure, she's clearly supposed to be less sadistic, evil and violent than the hell knights and whatnot, but I found "Lokna" to be a bit over the top. She's more of a sweet little girl, almost, than a demon.
    But aside from that I thought it was very good, and very erotic, if you got plans for additional chapters, please don't hesitate!
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  • From ANON - Chattur'gha on April 11, 2009
    Where are the updates?
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  • From ANON - Clayface on January 29, 2009
    Glad to see a new update, I don't know if the story is ready for new characters but I'm sure it will work out. But you need more sex in chapter 4.
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  • From ANON - Stranger on January 02, 2009
    GREAT story! Update please!
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  • From ninesenshi on December 31, 2008
    Cute. Good you came back for more.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From Satyr on December 30, 2008
    GAH!!! Like i posted on one of my other stories.. I'm SORRY!!!! I've been CRAZY busy the past four months.. I mean, come on guys... As the disclaimer says, this isn't a paying job, and my real one's demanded alot of attention as of late.

    However... because I am amazing... if not forgetful and stupidly evil by leaving y'all hanging so long... I happen to have come into some free time that comes in tandem with the flu. Therefore... I shall be wrapped in a blanket, with a mug of that nasty theraflu crap in one hand, as i heroiclly update Hell's Bitch.

    IT's comeing soon.... fans? are you there? please don't be dead. I haven't been gone THAT long.
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  • From ANON - drapehs on December 16, 2008
    You've received nothing but positive feedback, now update it you prick.
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  • From Knorg on December 14, 2008
    Gotta love Marine/Imp action. Two thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - Chattur'gha on November 16, 2008
    Do you read these reviews? Because if you do then read this: MORE HELL'S BITCH. I hate it when an author has a great idea and lets it die, it's even worse when the story is well written. Please do something with your story, I'm begging you. Oh and make sure it has a nice happy ending for the marine and the imp. Or not, do what you want just so long as you update your story.
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  • From ANON - Clayface on October 23, 2008
    Wonderful story, though I get the feeling that this story will die a quiet death and will never be continued. Well I want more, this is the type story I love, a demon with a "softer-side" it's perfect. Please update.
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  • From ANON - Evan Allen on July 14, 2008
    perfect. this was so wonderful in so many ways. I absolutley loved it, I never knew people with so much talent wrote this type of literature.
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