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Reviews for Riku's Desires

By : holywyvern
  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2009
    i can not wait until you post again hope its sooon and i hope this review makes you happy great story
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2008
    the plot idea was very good, and the writing is very smooth, however...9 and 11 inch cocks? Maybe it's just that that sort of thing doesn't do it for me, but it just makes the story less believe-able. To be bluntly honest it made me cringe a little.. However, you write very well, so good luck on the rest of your fiction writing.
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  • From ANON - Nikita on September 17, 2008
    OMFG! that was awesome!!!! is there abyway i can get this stupid site to tell me when you update? *ish new here* '-.- sorry. please, tell me if you are going to update!!!!
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  • From HappyDragon on September 14, 2008
    The plot is good.

    The story, and ideas are interesting. . . .

    I couldn't get past chapter/part 2 because of how Out Of Character Riku and Sora sound. Not their actions, the language they are using. . . The names ::shiver::

    I'm sorry. Good luck with this.
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  • From OrochiGreel on September 11, 2008
    UPDATE DAMN YOU!
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  • From ElleKai15 on September 04, 2008
    For some reason I think Leon (since sora did wonder what it was like with leon)and Riku should fuck sora somewhere public where people stop and watch (type of thing)- ya'know Kinky thoughts xD


    and i dont think you should listen to Anorexic Muffinz its fine the way it is at least for me
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  • From OrochiGreel on August 23, 2008
    CAN'T WAIT FOR THE Ultra kinky chapter! UkeSora!
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  • From ANON - Kitsune_Ai on August 23, 2008
    The intensity of greatness this story has grows with each chapter. ^^ Its delightful. You manage to find a pleasing balance of sex scenes, and character interaction (that isn't in relation to sex >>). Keep it up please!
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  • From kordavamennemer on August 23, 2008
    XD I wish I knew how to say hot in another word....mmm~ delicious. XD no that sounds too kinky. Okay, well I guess you understand that I really liked the chappie, heheh. The sickness was cute :] Just can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you~
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  • From kordavamennemer on August 18, 2008
    8D wooooow! really. It's hard to keep my mouth closed~ hahaha, bitch.

    Thanks for updating so fast x3 gosh! everything was just so hot!
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  • From kordavamennemer on August 17, 2008
    I'm pretty much addicted :3 oh gosh, Riku! You're such a bitch XD

    lol business sector. and a foursome! omagosh! a foursome!? even if it's only slightly possible, I still can't wait.
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  • From kordavamennemer on August 16, 2008
    onoes~ Riku, rape isn't the way to go! I'm glad that Sora's uncertainty was short, I was waiting for some hot action ;B

    A great read, and very steamy sex! Thank you for writing 8D [can't wait to see the kinky]
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