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From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2009
Vox's delusions of a domesticated Albel makes me giggle... Keep dreaming, Vox. They seem to be in a cozy place in their relationship again though, which is nice to read. Like you said, most fics with any mention of Vox/Albel usually hint at rape. Which is all fine and dandy but can get old after a while. It's true that they will never be the picture of a perfect, happy couple, but that's what keeps them interesting.

It was nice seeing Albel take more control in sex too, Vox didn't seem to mind either. And blowjobs are always a win. Maybe Vox will learn now that there are more fun things to sex than just 'bend over, insert here'.

Your chapters are always worth the wait, so don't worry about taking a long time to update. School and real life are still more important than porn (sadly).
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From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2009
Panty Thief Vox. Fuck yeah x3

And Demetrio was a nice little cameo.

Now that Vox and Albel are on better terms I am interested to see what will cause everything to fall apart again. You keep promising an epic ending, you tease.

My comment is short and lame :(
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From DarktoLight on February 25, 2009
I can cover two years in three word!

*Two years later*

I'm a genius ^^

...Wow, just wow. That chapter was amazing. ^Just^ what I needed to cheer me up ^^ God, I do love Albel though. And seeing him take control from those arrogant men (Demetrio is one boss I am more than happy to dispose of!) was just AWESOME. They didn't get their map back for a while, did they? :D

To sum up, six words...
Albel. And. Vox. Are. Hot. Together. ^^ ^^

Awaiting the next chapter ^very^ eagerly!
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From DarktoLight on February 10, 2009
O-only four more chapters? I'm not sure which I want more... For the story to go on or to know what happens...

Don't knock plot! Plot is the best thing EVAR. If you'll excuse my intentional misspelling >< It was good to learn a bit more of what Albel thinks about the whole situation, I can see why he would think things liket hat about Vox...

Their relationship is definitely a ^lot^ more like it is during the game's timeline now. And I applaud the way you've managed to keep them in character the entire time - if I ever write a long story, occasinally characterisation tends to slip...

Keep it up! ��
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From DarktoLight on January 25, 2009
Yay for plot :D
Vox's suspicious mind jumps to conclusions I see XD Poor Albel's going to get quite the shock... I'm sure he'll have fun with that ^^

And ouch, replacement limb. I couldn't help but think of the pain it must cause to attach nerves to technology... And typical Albel is ungrateful XD

Lovely chapter as ever ^^
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From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2009
I'm finally getting off my ass and reviewing. Hurray!

I really like how the story is shifting into the events of SO3. Vox is getting angry and paranoid. And I do enjoy an angry and less than sane Vox. I can't really pick just one favorite part from this, but I love the feel of change in it as a whole. Although, I did get a kick out of the end when Vox turned Albel down for sex. A sign of change, indeed.

As for the last chapter, all I can really say is... i love you x3
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From DarktoLight on January 10, 2009
Oooh, I do love surprise plot twists! Can't wait!
Ah, New York. I went to New York once, on a school trip. It was my first experience of America... And since I live in the country, it surprised me quite a bit. You can actually taste the air, and the pollution makes it warm even at night :o Still loved it tho.

A wonderfully written chapter as always. Albel's interactions with Woltar amuse me no end XD and the... Discipline session was very well written. This comes from an experience, I have a friend who's obsessed with writing that sort of story XD

Unfortunately, I just don't have time for another full-time, long story on top of my Tales of Symphonia one. I did write an AlbelxNel one (despite how overused that pairing is) and post it up on my fanfiction.net account (my username's the same over there) But I haven't actually written anything for a while. I have exams coming up. Important modules for my A-levels. So revision, unfortunately, most come first.
If you have any good suggestions for something for me to write, I'd be welcome to them ^^ I find it much easier to write with inspiration. And since my SO3 disc is now well and truly bust, I haven't been able to play it for a while, hence lack of inspiration... *sigh*

Although I doubt I could come up with something like this marvel no matter how hard I tried XD I can't say I'm all that good at writing intimate scenes.

Update soon ^^
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From DarktoLight on December 27, 2008
Wow, what a nice Christmas present :D
Albel's such an ungrateful brat lmao. I wouldn't expect anything less XD

Keep updating ^^ Your writing keeps getting better and better!
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From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2008
Sorry I have not officially reviewed in a while *fails*

Ah, I liked both chapters a lot! I'm sure Woltar is more than happy that he does not have to share a tent with those two anymore. That poor old man, I really hope that pillow did it's job :P As for Vox and Albel, Vox might have to employ the use of more alcohol in the future.

As for the yule chapter, it was really sweet (and hot >_>). Gentle Vox is nice to see every now and then. But I still have to agree with Vox, Albel is an ungrateful brat sometimes. Albel liked it I'm sure (that's actually pretty obvious :P), he just has to give a Vox a hard time. It's what he does.
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From DarktoLight on December 19, 2008
But I am no longer an anon, am I? *confused look*
Aw, I know how you feel. I've had Chemistry and Physics coursework (Especially not looking forward to TWENTY HOURS of Chemistry practical...) and University interviews.
But I'm glad you finished all your work before Christmas!

The chapter was good, especially if you weren't really in a writing mood. I can never force *anything* out when I don't feel like writing. (I draw instead...)
I liked Woltar's opinion *laughs* And I can most definitely see Albel being like that when drunk.
...Hmm, drunk Albel...
:D:D
Update soon! ^^
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From DarktoLight on November 29, 2008
Oh geez, those sorts of numbers don't make me happy about going to uni next year...
*ahem* yes, reviewing the story... *clears haze from head* that was a nice chapter. I like violent Albel. Which, I suppose, is normal Albel, but he was even more violent than usual, which was great.
[...but at least he slept vertically rather than in an upright position...] ...You mean horizontal, right?

Ah, I haven't read the manga. I'd like to, though, but have so far been unable to get my hands on it... And it was only a loose connection to those books. If you came up with it on your own I'd say it's original XD.

Oh my, I think poor Woltar is going to be traumatised for life XD Update soon! I might do a fanfic of my own at one point... But what with work, school and a Tales of Symphonia fic it might be hard to sneak in...
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From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2008
Yay angry sex. And I thought I felt sorry for Woltar in the last chapter. Well, if anything he should consider himself lucky he did not walk in on Vox and Albel while they were still... in the act. He probably would have keeled over then. It'll be interesting to see what becomes of this though, if anything. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always :P

Oh, I believe Seaheart was just the name of Aquios in the Japanese version of the game, but it might have been used to refer to Aquaria as a whole as well. It's fun mixing it up though.

Boo for more icky schoolwork :(
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From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2008
The beginning made me giggle, poor Albel. And poor Woltar for having to share a tent with those two. Ah, I'm glad to finally hear Vox's reason for hating Aquaria though, I was even more curious after his refusal to share when Albel first asked him. It was nice learning a bit more about Albel too (even if the maggot part kind of made me shudder a little, but I expect no less when it comes to Albel and his past).

Also, I approve of the all the cuddling that found its way into this chapter :P I liked the ending myself, too.

I wish you well on your term paper, it's better you focus on that and not worry about the story. Ah, I'll still be looking forward to the next chapter but patience is a virtue :)
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From DarktoLight on November 14, 2008
Review I shall :D
Wow, that was deep. I'd never really bothered to think of the reasons behind Albel's insults XD and the bond the riders share with the dragons reminded me in a way of Anne McCaffery's Pern series... Ever read that? The dragon riders go half-crazy if their dragons die, too.
Hee, I can just picture Albel leaning over a table to plan tactics like that ^^
Are you using the Japanese names for places in Aquaria? It's just that I don't recognise "Seaheart". But it's been a while since I played, so maybe it's just me...
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From ANON - DarktoLight on November 10, 2008
Hullo! I've been reading this story for a while but never really reviewed... :O
Must say it's awesome ^^ Not a pairing I would have thought of myself, but you... I dunno, make it work, somehow. Especially since I could never picture Albel as gay. (I hate AlbelxFayt, go die in a corner you sucky pairing). This just works.
So congrats on making such an epic story. I loved the dragon scene especially. I await more updates with interest :D
Congrats, you've changed my view on my fave SO3 charrie XD For the better!
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