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Reviews for Atmospheric Pressure

By : Starryeyedstar
  • From LunariusKoneko91 on March 08, 2010
    Amount Axel paid first: $200
    Amount Axel handed next: $100
    Drinks: (maybe) $50
    Axel's bail: nonexistent

    BTW this was an amasing and hilarious oneshot!!! Lllllloooooovvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeddddddddd-iit!
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  • From HappyDragon on October 02, 2008
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    Ending = Epic lawl.

    This was utterly adorable. And perfect. And much more solid grammatically than your normal works. It was nicely paced, well thought out, everything! I loved this sooooo much. The way all the characters interacted with one another, the hinting at the up-coming relationship between Sora and Riku--which leaves a convenient loop-hole for a continuation--and the repeated attempts by Axel to get at Roxas. Pure wonderfulness. ^_^

    If you can't bring yourself to do short one-shots and PWP anymore, don't worry! Because if you keep turning out well-crafted shorts like these, no-one will mind.

    Keep it up! Good luck writing!
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  • From TheSimi on October 01, 2008
    Oh this was wonderful and amazing and awesome and...and...just great!

    I love the way you write Sora and Riku and your Axel just cracks me up.

    Thank you so very much for a truly lovely story!
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