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Reviews for The Passionate Beat

By : crymsonpassion
  • From Minamino on September 14, 2009
    So I review on the first chapter and don't review again til the last. I'm a naughty reader... What's even worse is that I didn't start reading this until yesterday. Bad Light!

    But this was AWESOME! And holy crap, that lemon was hot! And oh, poor Demy for being with that damn Xigbar!!! >:( I nearly cried at that part. And such cute evil twins. XD. Nami and Larxene were great, too.
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  • From ANON - Akaku on August 24, 2009
    THis cant be so!!! Its going to end soon?!? THe agony!!! I love yor story T^T ah well. At least it will always be here so i can reread anytime i want!! ^-^ Can't wait for next chapter
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  • From ANON - Dumb Apple on July 05, 2009
    Bwah~! You can't leave it there! Evil, evil, evil place to leave that chapter, damn you!

    ... but I love the story and I'm looking forward to more! :D
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  • From on June 23, 2009
    You should update this one instead.... Why? 'Cause i said so, dammit!!!
    Anyways, kinda angst-y and a bit confusing, but still worth reading. You should work on your hooks a bit more, since i was starting to lose interest sometimes...
    Also, I wanna hear Zex's side of the story.... is he missing dem? Was he hurt in the past? and why would Lex care if he was kissin' Dem?
    But, yeah... I'll def. be checking for updates!!
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  • From ANON - kinkou on June 22, 2009
    YAY! Update. I was starting to go through withdrawls and had to keep rereadign the last chapter. hehehe.... *sniff* but poor Demy! *pouts* Hopefully this pain will be short lived. (at least on my end, lol ) . I can't wait for another update to this or Accidental.
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  • From Wulfie89 on May 19, 2009
    AWWWWWW POOR DEMY!!!!*cries and huggies a Demy plushie.*Poor poor little Demy!!!

    I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Meghan on April 09, 2009
    Fuck, I love this story, but I definitally need to read a twincest/AkuRiku lemon.
    Update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Wulfie89 on March 08, 2009
    OMG!!! Those last few lines made me laugh! Dude this story is awesome and I can't wait to see more of it.
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  • From ANON - NeonOranges on March 04, 2009
    I gotta say, I really hope Zexion in the seme for this pairing, because I just can't picture Demmy as anything but a total uke.
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  • From ANON - Zura on March 04, 2009
    It does annoy me a little that you still until now haven't decided if this is going to be Zemyx or Dexion (DEXION FTW!), seeing as many people does have left a review telling you. I do stand firm that this should be Dexion, even more after this chapter. A seme that acts like Zexion in this story isn't anything new, and boring like crap. An uke that acts like Zexion (devious, manipulating and so on) is FUN! Therefore Dexion is the way to go.

    But whatever, I'll just have to wait and see I suppose. I do hope for Dexion anyway, or I'll just have to find another good story.
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  • From trystkinkou on March 03, 2009
    *SQUEEEEE*

    I love how devious Zexy is in this thing, and how heartbreakign Demy is. I hope the next one isn't too far away, but I'll just have to keep re-reading Zexy's part in this chapter lol.

    And I just can't see the Demy you've got here as the seme. Zexy's too manical and well devious to be the uke.
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  • From ANON - Zura on January 18, 2009
    Actually, the whole fact that the story seem to circle around AkuRoku and RiSo is annoying me a little bit. Not only because I don't really care for either of them (especially AkuRoku, it's yucky), but right now, it seems that you focus just a tad bit more on them then Demyx... I understand there aren't much Zexion yet (but I'm looking forward to his introduction, favorite as he is), so I'll look forward to that.

    And I don't know if I reviewed this before, or not, but I'm really hoping for a decent Dexion (Demyx on top FTW) for once. Zemyx are EVERYWHERE to read, and I can actually not see Demyx as an uke (which is why I had a hard time reading for other story, Accidental Infatuations, I can't spell anymore), so yeah, I'm totally rooting for Dexion, because it's far more rare, and we Dexion fans need some loving too.

    And also because this story seem to be a real ass kicker, it would be such a shame if I would need to dump this to, because Zemyx scare me so badly.
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  • From EuphoricEpiphany on January 14, 2009
    It's been a while since I read something that had me laughing that much. : D
    You have the most hilarious phrases every now and then, they make my stomach ache when I can't stop chuckling. 8DD

    But you do know how to write serious pieces, too - that much became clear with the second chapter. :3

    I'm just sad since there is no more to read. D':
    To quote our beloved Miss Spears:
    GIMME MORE.

    As in, you've done a very good job, keep it up. : D

    Also, my vote goes for Zemyx. >.>
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  • From Kareki on January 12, 2009
    Gotta say, Roxas and Sora as sex fiends is downright adorable. Absolutely love it.
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  • From ANON - StalkerChick92 on January 05, 2009
    Hellu! ^_^

    me luffles the alarm clock scenario!! i can totally c that happening to poor demy lmao!

    the twins had ice cream 4 breakfast!? O.O *runs and hides*
    .....*runs out to drag computer into hiding as well*

    but anyways..... i luv this fic! u did a great job ^_^
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