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Reviews for The Crimson Door

By : DyingEyes
  • From ANON - fanboy of legendary fics on November 23, 2008
    oh my god this story sounds totally awesome!please PLEASE continue to write until the end of this story.It seems that nowadays more and more awe inspiring authors have been neglecting their passion of writng. It is horrible for me because then i cant say how Great they truly are. but you definfitely are amazing DyingEyes!!!!your reading fanboy until the end! update
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  • From HappyDragon on November 15, 2008
    XDDDD Well my guess was Ansem, but like I said, his eyes are naturally orange. ^_^ But what are Nikki cookies anyway? ?_?

    Oh . . . . . . Cookies made by Nikki. XD

    Mmm, a good and interesting setup chapter. I’m sill interested in the story, but I just have one quest:

    Why was most of the chapter italicized, and then went to normal formatting near the end?

    Your prologue was also in a normal format, so I have no idea if this was an accident, or on purpose. If you meant to do that, I’d say pick one or the other, and stick with it - unless you’re doing a flashback or something that would warrant a changing in the formatting.

    Otherwise, this still looks good, and I’ll have to keep reading.
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  • From Minamino on November 15, 2008
    Nyu!!! Me like it, me like it!!! Please more, I want to know about Riku!!!
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  • From HappyDragon on November 14, 2008
    1) Yes, I want more.

    2) I'm guessing the Vamp is Ansem, Seeker of Darkness, aka the Heartless Lord. And if it isn't, I'd suggest that you reconsider--if Ansem hasn't been cast in another part yet.

    That said, Ansem's orange eyes are fitting for a Vampire, so they don't have to be red unless he's feeding, or you're doing it for thematic reasons.

    Still this looks interesting. I'm guessing that this isn't the Destiny Islands that we know from the games, or there wouldn't be snow outside. So I'm looking forward to more information all around. So if you keep writing, I'll keep reading, and let you know what I'm thinking.

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