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Reviews for Clearer in Time

By : ericblaire
  • From ANON - Nomeka on August 02, 2014
    A beautiful end to a very imaginative spin on an old Zelda story. You definitely have a knack for storytelling. The 'smut' content was beautifully done, and in a way that it didn't interfere with the story, or seem like a focal point, but something that just happened in the course of events. And though I have not played many of the LoZ games, I have heard of Vaati, and his appearance here only further cemented him as one of my favorite characters. Though, I do hope that Ruto gets a happy ending as well. I mean, when she awakens as a Sage, wouldn't she remember that, in a pas.. in a futu... in an alternate life, she and Link were engaged by Zora law? (ish?) I do hope she finds someone.

    Also, it is very, /very/ unfair to give out hints of epic adventures in the epilogue! I do hope that at some point in the future, you expand on those and write more awesome fanfics taking place in a darker, more adult world of the LoZ games mentioned like you did here. I actually cried when Dark Link was forced to stab Link, and then himself was eliminated by Ganon.

    Also, it is a little bit of a shame that the whole "Dark Link seducing Link" in the first fight never went anywhere. That would have really make it more difficult for Link to keep his mind focused on the task at hand, trying to figure out why he was having these sorts of feelings with a man, his own dark self at that.

    Also, loved the reference to Oracle of Seasons. That was a fun game!

    And again, I do hope very much that you eventually write fanfics based on those games and adventures you mentioned int he Epilogue.
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  • From Arridu on October 25, 2012
    I am writing this review having just finished A Link to the Past III, and Vaati may not be from oot, but seeing him out of nowhere certainly made for a pleasant surprise as he is one of my favorite characters in Legend of Zelda, so far I've found this story quite well put together with a interesting cast of characters, and the Malon/ Dark Link pairing is quite an interesting idea I have to say, well thats it for now, thank you for providing such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - TaChan on December 21, 2011
    Well written and thus far I love the plot line. For some reason I find myself hoping that Ganon makes it up with Nabooru in the end. I might just be hopeful, but I thought they were rather cute as a couple and I hope that if all the other girls their little happy endings, I hope that Nabooru can have hers as well.
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  • From goldenlady88 on December 30, 2010
    i absolutely love this im really getting into it! you a good writer!
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  • From themaidenlyra on May 28, 2010
    i am in love. this story was amazing. the ending almost made me cry it was beyond perfict. thank you for the gift of your wrighting and i hope to read more form you.


    with all my love The Maiden Lyra
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  • From Embraceofshadows on April 19, 2010
    That was great. I read it in one sitting couldn't stop.
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  • From kyubiman on July 08, 2009
    Whoa, that was epic. Truely a great story! I was a bit worried in the last chapter, but you finished with a bang. Well done!:) Is there a sequel to this? I'm going to go check.
    KM
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  • From ANON - GPoyar on June 27, 2009
    Damn good story man. Probably the best Zelda fic that I have ever read. I was really impressed about the depth of emotion conveyed combined with ingenious use of plot. Keep writing, this story kicked ass.
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  • From Potatoreaper on April 26, 2009
    i'll keep it brief this time (months after the story is done, GG self)
    1: thanks for the counter review. makes me feel special.
    2: thanks for the overall positive ending. i was feeling pretty down after watching code geass' "shoot you in the crotch" style ending, so a happy end was just what i needed.

    PS i'm a dude :O
    PPS I use lots of faces ^_^
    PPPS final thanks for a great rendition of oot.
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  • From ANON - ME again!!! ^_^ on April 24, 2009
    Ooohhh The ending was soooo cute!!! Even though I'm sad for Zelda. Poor girl. :( But it still was cool and cute! specially the remembering things! SO CUTE!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Alright alright
    I liked most of all it besides that you made Link a man whore. He just liked to sleep around with like every girl or at least do stuff... O_o OH OH OH AND I LOVED THAT You brought Dark Link back!!! YAYAYA Happy endings for almost every one!!! XD ^_^
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  • From ANON - ME!! on April 24, 2009
    I don't know what you guys are thinking. That ganon and Zelda match was hot and totally made sense!! It was hot to.. O_o Very hot!
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  • From Perfect Purity on March 25, 2009
    This review contains spoilers.

    I just read the whole thing. Grammar errors aside, it was a cool read. I enjoyed the changes to the main story you made, such as turning the Lens of Truth into a mental device, and the addition of Navi near the end rather than the start (I actually didn't even notice she was absent until she was mentioned).

    I also liked how you turned Dark Link into some kind of anti-hero, but up until the end I wondered what he was going to accomplish against his creator, and sure enough, he stood NO CHANCE AT ALL and basically got creamed.

    I wouldn't have it any other way. =D Well done on that. Speaking of Dark Link, I thought it was exceptionally cool how some of the bosses were actually Ganondorf scheming behind the scenes.

    The multiple personalities of Zelda and Sheik were an interesting twist that I thought was pretty neat. I thought for sure a threesome was coming...

    I wasn't too keen on the addition of Vaati. His addition to the story seemed too abrupt for him to actually mean anything to me, but you used him well enough once he was introduced.

    I also liked how Link didn't survive the battle. It's an interesting change to "defeat the villain, save the princess, get laid, happily ever after" and I for one am glad it happened.

    All in all, it was an enjoyable read, and while reading this I could not stop thinking about how Twisted Futurity was never finished. If you haven't read it, dig for it on this site. It's absolutely incredible.

    Nice work!
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  • From RinxAkarui on March 18, 2009
    Great Story! This is probably one of the best Zelda fanfictions I've read! Keep up the good work :D
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  • From Shinji on March 15, 2009
    fraking awesome
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  • From ANON - DR. Jinxers on March 14, 2009
    Absolutely Beautiful.

    I had some qualms with how the story had ended initially, but I'm glad I read on to the epilogue. This very script, perchance less the adult content, would make for an epic remake of Ocarina of Time. And I tell you now, I'm in tears. I haven't cried over a story since... I must have been a rather young child, to say so, but even at that, this story moves me to tears.

    You're incredibly talented.

    Don't EVER give up writing. If you aren't published yet, I'm sure you will be some day. This story is proof enough. Thank you for writing it, from the bottom of my heart. Thank you.

    Every second I spent reading this, was absolutely worth it in every way.

    Cordially yours,

    The Doc.
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