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Reviews for Standard Deviation

By : karose
  • From Kraken on December 10, 2008
    I love this fic. I came to it initally because it had BB/Ocelot in it (my OTP), and even though they don't technically ever hook up, it was interesting to see how it played out (the line "eight year crush" suddenly got me all sad and nostalgic). There were a lot of moments that jarred me in a good way, like when the scenes changed abruptly to different points of Ocelot's life, though they all flowed together seamlessly. The Ocelot/Olga was intriguing, too, because I'd actually heard the theory before (though I don't believe it). I'm also glad you didn't try to feminize Olga because she really is that butch, which makes her one of the more interesting females in the MGS series. I would say that the only complaint I have is that the ending was a bit abrupt, but it was probably because I was so engrossed with the fic that I was sad to see it end. 5/5 (sorry for the long review)
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