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Reviews for Ripple Recovery

By : wanderingaddict
  • From cantankerous33 on January 18, 2010
    Wow. Reading the whole thing was a blast; you've made me care and reminisce about that blasted Hinterlands.

    Throughout the first four chapters I was wondering if you write smut as adeptly as you do, uh, non-smut. From what little (oh so little) goodies you've given us I'd have to say that FUCK YES, you do. You are cruel and evil for stopping there, I hate you :
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  • From SeskiLexi on January 16, 2010
    I love this story. Its hilarious and it makes me thing and... I keep coming back to it.

    As for changing 'Varin's name... I could go either way on that? Depends on how much work you'd feel up to doing and how much it would bug your conscience though...

    Anyway. Thank you for making me laugh and chuckle once more.
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  • From Fawnheart on January 13, 2010
    Brilliant, as always. I hope that's not the last we see of Hawke and Amberglade, they are still going to be prize arseholes, aren't they? :( I love those two...
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  • From ANON - Biske on January 13, 2010
    ... Malton could guess who >one< that part- “And a sort of...

    ... orc thought darkly. The usual >fair< was maybe an arm around the shoulder.

    Now that I'm done picking apart your English, I can say I loved it!
    Its pretty awesome how you're using characters from the game, so I'm torn on changing the name even though we've all become accustomed to 'Gilvarin'. I'm not sure how I managed to overlook that before now though.
    But we finally get to the fun part and stop like that :x
    I'm betting we'll never actually get to see any man lovin' at this point, but I still want mooore.
    How about we forget the gold if you get the next part out within a few weeks? ;)
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  • From ANON - sucat on January 12, 2010
    First off, HOW COULD YOU STOP AT THAT SPOT?! You're mean and cruel!

    I'm really glad Ambergale and Hawk got what was coming to them. Summerdrake is my new hero, even if I don't remember the awesomeness of her running straight off a cliff. It was really enjoyable watching her cut them down, and Malton realizing the extent after talking to his friend afterward.

    It's also nice seeing that they made a tradition with the Nuzzrim's Revenge. Though it seems to change between Nuzzrin, Nuzzrim and Nuzzrum haha. I guess it depends on how drunk they are after it ruins their throat.
    I really liked the sitting riddle, even though it was obvious where it was going. :) Totally set Malton up, the wuss. Even if it's part of his charm as a muscular non-combatant. I wonder if Gil' thinks that's the only way he can get Malton?

    As for the name, I think you should change it to the real NPC's name. I haven't leveled an alt in a while, but it's nice seeing the fact this was based off of a quest in the game and recognizing the NPCs from the story. *shrug* Might be jus' me.
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  • From brainfear on January 12, 2010
    More please!

    ch5
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  • From ANON - Biske on October 10, 2009
    amg took you long enough to update ;-;
    Write moar plx kthnx
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  • From Britomartis on October 06, 2009
    Send more updates! I love this story!
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  • From Fawnheart on October 04, 2009
    Awww, lol, poor Hawk and Amberglade! I love those two haha. Seriously, they are brilliant arseholes hey lol. I don't know why you thought the other chapter was boring. It's brilliant now, of course but it was great before. And sif I'd ever have enough of you, wonderboy! You rock!

    I *seriously* love what you did with Gil this chapter though. What a lethal, fiery little brawler lol. Although he isn't that little I suppose. I like how Hawk didn't back down either (was too daft to?) and just went 'dark'. lol, I love stoopid villians, makes me wanna eat them alive lol. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Amberglade. She rocks hahahaha. Seriously, I *saw* her fall out into the field, swearing her head off lol. She cracks me up something bad lol. Whadda bitch!

    And of course, Mal...how I love the little puffed up muscle ball, let me count the ways lol. Poor thing, having to save the bastards from Gil. In another life I bet he'd wish he could just let the elf go and tear them apart :p Glad he didn't though. I love those two lol.

    Brilliant as always wonderboy. You could make two flies mating on a piece of turd into a literary masterpiece! :D
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  • From Fawnheart on March 29, 2009
    wow...you are soooo good! What stuck out the most in this chapter? What DIDN'T stick out? hahahah there's sooooo much good shit in here. Kk, my favourite part, well one of them, was OF COURSE Malton's big green dick hahahaha I was cracking up, half at the mental image of him rocking on his heels, looking around at the mountains while doing a camel impersonation with water retention :P and then half with lust at his big, green .... woo hoo o.0 hahaha but I'm sure that doesn't come as a shock :p

    I have to say though, I looooovvvveeee Hawk and Amberglade. I can't help it, I always love arseholes and those two are just brilliant. I love the part where Amberglade tumbles out of the weeds hahahaha I just LOVE her! Her and Hawk just ooze personality, kind of like a big green slime :P But honestly, they are so vivid. I think it's because the whole chapter was at this nice, rolling pace, full of Mal and 'Varin's comfortable companionship, and then whoomp! Arrows and Hawk and Amberglade tumbling out of the leaves lol. I just love this! Yeah, some Hawk and Amberglade sex, I think she should bust his balls hahaha NO NO NO!!! LET THEM BOTH CHOW DOWN ON MAL'S BIG GREEN...YEE HAA!!! hahaha.

    Dagnabbit lol.

    You are so good!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 24, 2009
    It's awesome! XD Haha, it's so much fun~. ^_^ Other than those elves being bullies. -.- But the writing itself is very fun to read! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hana on February 14, 2009
    nice story, very funny, I look forward to more
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  • From zomboid on January 10, 2009
    Easily the funniest thing I've read in a long time. More, please?
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  • From ANON - sucat on January 09, 2009
    One of the best written orcs I have ever read. Your style is very interesting and the story flows pretty well. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue it!
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  • From rosieposie on January 09, 2009
    Great job. I was laughing through most of part 2. The way he played those elves was awesome. Your descriptions were beautiful (not to mention good)! Want more!

    When are the naughty bits? *pout*
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