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Reviews for Vacation Leave

By : Eristia
  • From ANON - CatAlin on October 30, 2011
    I'm not a fan of LukexTear .. but I love the brutal abuse he's giving her right now! I'm curious to see how Mer .. Natalia and Asch fidget around each other later and what else'll happen. Perhaps give me a slight warning before any LukexTear lemon happens, so I can prepare my mind for it.

    C-A
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2011
    Wow. I love this! I can not wait until it's done so I can read it all!!!
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  • From ANON - Yuugao on August 13, 2011
    I really love how your story has been going so far, it really has a good mix of plot and romance building and I love how you depicted their world. I do hope you'll find more inspiration to write (Hell I'll draw you pictures if you like) and put up more chapters soon~
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  • From ANON - ME on August 12, 2011
    Haven't read this in a while. Please keep updating! I love your fics, especially luke/tear. I really hope to see more Luke/tear from you!
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  • From ANON - Jashin on December 15, 2009
    Not as intense as the other chapters but it is still good. Too much intensity can be bad.
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  • From ANON - hihanahotaru on October 04, 2009
    YES! LUKE TEAR'S COMING TO THE CHORAL CASTLE!
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  • From Vook on June 19, 2009
    Hey, I really liked this! I've played through about 2/3 of Abyss now, and I love how Meryl came out in your fic. (Well, I prefer to call her Natalia, for who I know her as in the game, in terms of personality.) I love how spunky and resolute she is...but also kind of naïve. I also love her confusion about the whole "sex" topic. (Like she's thinking: I understand it's pleasurable enough, but...what the hell does Asch SEE in this sort of thing that makes him want to think about it all day and all night? I had no idea...)

    Keep going! The only thing I don't particularly like, actually, is that it's a bit hard to read because your spacing is kind of big.
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  • From ANON - Loz on June 17, 2009
    Wah!!♥ What steamy and awesome chappie!! Natalia fights back!! Please release the 3rd chapter soon!!
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  • From ANON - Hotaru on May 22, 2009
    OMG!!! YAHOO!! i LOVED IT!! Its the best. BEST BEST BEST. infinity/100!! Asch and natalia having smut war.. *nosebleed*! Keep up the amazingly good..no...excellent..no..FABULOUS (dist?!) work!!! ♥♥!!! I showed my friends..and they screamed "HOLY SMUT flhdskglahg ITS THE RAPE BOMB!!"!! anyways, once again. fabulous job!!.. Good luck, now i want more XD!!
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  • From ANON - LaZy on May 22, 2009
    I LOOOOOOOVE IT!! OMG THIS IS WAAAAR~ SMUT WAAR!! I LOVE IT!! Great, now you'll make me bug you for another update XDDD. Anyway, I really can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter was a total leap from chapter 1. Chapter one is just candy compared to this chapter! keep writing, We'll be here to support you!
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  • From ANON - Jashin on May 22, 2009
    Great to see my fave author back in action... Great fic... Can't wait for the continuation... Keep it up... :D
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  • From ANON - Loz on March 27, 2009
    Finally, someone has the courage to write an AxN adult fanfic!! Thank you so much!! Great Job!! It's so good... E-Either way please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jashin on February 24, 2009
    Hot fic... Chapter one is a tease... Let me wait for chapter 2... :D
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