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Reviews for Tarren Mills is under attack!

By : SevenTreasuresxxx
  • From Demmu on January 22, 2013
    Just wanted you to know I love this story SO much. I've read it like 26 times. The characters seem so real, gets me totally excited. Please write another chapter and feel free to check out my first story!
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  • From ravielyaxis on October 02, 2009
    I do hope you add more to it soon. I am enjoying this story a lot.
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  • From wanderingaddict on August 12, 2009
    neat. at first I was a little leery at this story, because I personally am of the opinion that priests > all, heh, as well as not really inclined to like... well, "pitiful ukes," for lack of a better word. Personally, I think they're... well, too pathetic, and don't have to much characterization and aren't terribly interesting because all they do is lay around and cry. And, ah, right now I think that Donelzane sort of falls into that category. without any backstory to go on (or at least, none that I can remember offhand, I apologize if there is and I'm wrong), right now he seems to me like a very generic, wimpy bottom and I can't really bring myself to care about him (I mean, sheesh, just use psychic scream and run away already, haha!). I mean, without anything to go off of, like why he's there and not helping out his homeland, or what possessed him to leave Quel'thalas, or... or his family or his motivations or his sexuality or anything, he's just this kinda doll that things happen to and I can't really bring myself to care about.

    Your other characters though, haha wow! They got SO MUCH personality! Arcelare and Kasteus especially, heh, I really dig the interactions between those two (and their own character flaws/traits/etc). I mean, their passive, mild acceptance and obvious enjoyment of one another comes across so clearly, right from the start. the particular spot I'm thinking of is when Arcelare just reaches across to the pally to fish out his dick, and the dranei doesn't flinch or react at all, as though it were th most casual thing in the world. haha, that right there says so much about the two the them, and makes them so enjoyably unique that I have to say I'm hooked. I just gotta read more about two so deviant guys, as well as this Atris rogue who's suddenly shown up as well. heh, rogues are always hilarious and never fail to liven any story up, so I'm real excited to see what happens with those three next.

    and I'm not like, ragging on the priest at all (heh, well, maybe a little). I recognize his place in the story (and that it would be a lot different and not at all the same if he wasn't the exact way he is). and that a lot of people probably do like him and find him great. I'm just saying my take on him is all. nothing more, just how I react to his character, in case you were at all curious. take it or leave it as you will, I mean, I'm just one person and this isn't my story or anything, and I wouldn't want to give you the idea that I'm trying to insult or hurt or deride you in any way. I think it's a great story and a lot of fun. There are some characters I really like a lot and more or less rock my world, and then there're characters that I sort of yawn and roll my eyes at. Don't get me wrong, I still think some things are pretty hot, like the night elf getting a twisted pleasure in making someone come against their will and stuff. But that's something that's pretty rad in any situation. I'm just saying that for me, personally, right now there's nothing to make me feel like the priest is interesting enough to invest my attention. that's all. yeah. good story, nice long length, well thought out and great character customization. definite A quality!


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  • From ravielyaxis on June 27, 2009
    Oh, this was good. I want to read more, I do. lol
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  • From Dreamproof on May 24, 2009
    I really liked this >FD I do hope that you write more someday. I would love to see more blef rape.
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  • From delonariel on May 04, 2009
    I re-read this and found I enjoyed it a lot more after reading your other story. I hope you'll concider writing more
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  • From kitsunenyu on March 11, 2009
    I almost passed this story by. Then I saw the next one and your desc intrigued me. I must say that I found it very descriptive and well written! :) Only thing to improve is sometimes your tense is unclear about who you are referring to, but still very nice :)
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