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Reviews for Death Knight's Pet

By : rosieposie
  • From Fawnheart on March 17, 2009
    Noooo! I didn't know you'd written another story, I have snaga and rea bookmarked and have been checking for updates on them...but...yeah...I hope the gnome death knight is gonna get it in this one...and bloody good too! Gnome snot everywhere! What a villain you've made in this one!
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  • From rosieposie on March 11, 2009
    Addict, you make some good points. However, the conversation is meant to be very one-sided at the moment to help establish dominance. Iexsera didn't /allow/ Ilya to talk at that point.

    I'll try to keep the details flowing, as well as regular revisits of the descriptions. As for her being a gnome, blame my friend who made her >_>

    I'm going to work on the next chapter soon, but it's something that I'm going to be very critical of as I do it (much like my snaga/rea story), so please be patient :)
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  • From wanderingaddict on March 11, 2009
    hahaha! "some sort of growth at her waist" eh? is it a third, "vestigial" leg perhaps? or something similar? :P

    haha. this sounds like too much fun. I have to say that Ido want to read more, if only because I want to see if you'll be able to make me take the idea of a gnome+anytihng seriously. haha!

    constructively, you could flesh out some of the conversation. such as that last part, where you end one paragraph with the novice nodding? you could just add a little bit of description of the gnome chick there as the opening instead, just to remind us readers what she looks like again (it is kinda hard to keep fresh information salient in one's mind, after all). I mean, I've read the whole thing and I still can't help but picture the gnome as your standard gnome chick with an oversided head and two bright, pink pigtails.

    yeah. just something for the future is all. working in an extra detail, here and there. ^.^
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