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Reviews for Zira Darkstar

By : xxfatedsoulxx
  • From Youkai88 on October 15, 2011
    Just finished all 23 chapters

    ... so when are you updating? xD
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  • From ANON - Oni Alter on March 01, 2011
    I've read all the way up to Chapter 23. Lots of this is very true to the game, yet still keeps a level of its own creativity with the seemingly professional writing style. The imagery is top-notch, and I find myself REALLY wanting to play the game again while reading this. I can't WAIT to see how things go once they leave Taris!
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  • From ANON - Adrianna on June 26, 2010
    You have no idea how happy I was to find out you were still writing this story. I absolutely love your style of story-telling, and the characters you've introduced so far seem spot on (with the possible exception of Bastila, but I'll chalk that up to her lack of interaction with the main characters so far). You manage to take a game that I have absolutely played to death, and make it fresh around every corner. The recent encounters with rakghouls were especially surprising, as I never saw them as that frightening until I read your take on it. On a final note, the fight scenes are perfectly done. I hate reading stories where they spend a paragraph describing every blink of an eye. You portray the battles as quick and frantic, with a brutal efficency. Plus, Zira is just a badass.

    I will continue to follow this story with interest, and hope you see it through to the end.
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  • From nocontact on November 03, 2009
    This cocky pretentious Bastila will make for some great arguments in the future.

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From nocontact on November 03, 2009
    Tell envy that he's got his own KOTOR story to be working on! Not that this one isn't insanely awesome in itself mind you...

    Though a little more interaction between Revan and everybody else would be nice, just cause the game has no vocals, doesn't mean your version has to be that way.

    Oh, and her continually growing attachment to Trask is just one kick to me after another. Very cruel of you, I like it!

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From ANON - anima_maligna on June 07, 2009
    I've read many "walkthroughs" with Revan I enjoyed. But this is the first one where I like Revan's character. You write well and the characters are likable. Thank you for sharing this with us. :)
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  • From Quinnsharpe on May 27, 2009
    Glad to see you haven't given up. Hope everything gets sorted out and looking forward to the next update
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  • From ANON - LadyQ on May 15, 2009
    Are you going to update this again? I check back every week looking for more :)
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  • From ANON - tscecest on April 15, 2009
    It's pretty good so far, but you should really take off some of those tags; it makes it look like you're baiting for hits by putting in tags that don't have anything to do with the story. At least, remove the tags that haven't appeared yet, then add them back in when they come into play.
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  • From ANON - Greg on April 08, 2009
    Eagerly awaiting the next chapters! I've been lurking the KotOR section here for quite some time and your chapters' mix of canon and originality makes it feel like I'm seeing the material I already know and love in new depth rather than reading a straight-up walkthrough or an off-kilter story where the characters just don't feel quite right.

    Love the Shad Camper name a few chapters back, my copies of the comics just arrived today and the resulting KotOR ferver prompted me to come back, reread, and leave this comment. ;3
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  • From klick2000 on April 05, 2009
    I haven't finished the story yet, but I liked what I've seen so far. The key to sex scenes is to make it agonizingly long. Tease the reader with it. Make them sweat to get through it. That way, when they finally get to the climax they're more than ready to explode. I liked how you did Bastila's scene. I loved how naive she was, and its always fun to see some one knock her off her high horse. Keep up the good work, Bravo!
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  • From ANON - LadyQ on April 05, 2009
    I love it! A good retelling of KotOR and don't worry about the sex scenes, they were fine. I can't wait for Zira and Carth to hook up!
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  • From ANON - Quinn on April 05, 2009
    This has so far been a pleasure to read.

    Both the Carth and Bastila sex scenes are extremely well-written; I was very surprised when I saw it was your first time writing such scenes.

    Your general writing style is also mature and impressive. It certainly stands out in the top tier amongst AFF, at least. I like the way you add extra story to some of the boring side-quests like the Sith party and rich girl - it really keeps the plot more fresh and interesting for someone who's already played the game.

    I look forward to reading more of this, well done.
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  • From ANON - Spiriti on April 04, 2009
    This is really good, easily the best retelling of KotOR I've read. Love the detail and the writing style, keep it up!
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