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Reviews for Tales of the Tenkai Star: Tierkreis

By : Cross838
  • From Streti on January 02, 2010
    Hiya! Are you still around? Would you like a Google Wave invitation?
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  • From joeparas1988 on August 31, 2009
    Think there'll be an update anytime soon? It's been a while to leave us all hanging!
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  • From McDohl on July 02, 2009
    I like these stories so far. I haven't got to far in the game yet so I can't give any suggestions . I hope that you'll decide to that Suiko 2 story you mention or even a Suiko 5 story
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  • From joeparas1988 on June 30, 2009
    Awesome chapter dude. Shame we didn't get to see AU Marica in action, but what happened in this chapter was good enough. I find it especially hilarious that Tsugu can go around boning his neighbours' wives without them even caring, lol.

    Can't wait to see the other pairings in other chapters.


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  • From ANON - Lovejaw on June 29, 2009
    Before I continue reading on with this series (which is great so far) I need to know, in the first chapter you made homoerotic allusions involving Liu, but will there be any gay sex at all in this series? I kind of hope there will be.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2009
    It's very nice to see a new chapter of this super hot fic, and I'm very happy to see my idea concerning Tsugu's first dominating ass pounding of his own mommy is being considered. It would be es[ecially great if the first time were a little...rough ^_^
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  • From Streti on June 29, 2009
    Glad to see the new chapter! I like your interpretation of other Marica and her effect on people around her. With her and Tsugu running around, the village is just going sex crazy as illustrated in the fic! At first I thought you might relay too much of the game's dialogue but then it turned out how you had spiced the dialogue and the events, and it creates a humorous and unbelievable scene in the middle of the village. "And I’m not some slut who’s going to have sex in the middle of the village with some random assholes!" - great line from Marica in the situation... also, great observations from Liu throughout, once again. But even though it's nice to have all three women take care of Tsugu's sloppy climax (painting a great scene in the middle of the village), what happened to Liu and Jale's?

    Oh btw, "They certainly weren’t going to investigate this other Marica until their hormones were taking care of." - one of Liu's great observations but with "taken" typoed.
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  • From Cross838 on June 24, 2009
    Hey Streti,

    Sorry about my long absence. I really appreciated your in depth review and that alone would have been enough to ensure a continuance but I've been sidetracked by life. Look for an update this weekend. Thanks again...that review was awesome!
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  • From Streti on June 23, 2009
    Been hoping to see more from you... how are things going?
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  • From joeparas1988 on May 09, 2009
    God, one of the only Tierkreiss stories out there. Please give us some more before I start clawing my eyes out.

    I enjoy the way in which you seem to be tackling the genre, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. I'd love to see some Moana action, or maybe a Chrondechild/Tsugu/Fredegund/Asad no homo gangbang. Though, any form of update would be awesome at this point.

    Eagerly awaiting your next story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2009
    I haven't play the game yet but I like this story keep it coming
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2009
    An idea of a story you could do; The first time Tsugu pounded Sisuca's ass! I'll bet she was pleasantly when it turned out he was the dominant party and not the other way around!
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  • From Streti on April 20, 2009
    A very nice story! I'd say it has better flow than your previous one. Telling it from Liu's point of view works very well and Liu's personality is also well handled, especially the introspection with his brief annoyance. The Alpha Tenkai thing is taken to humorous heights with husbands bragging about Tsugu sleeping with their wives. :)

    It also helps develop the game's opening setting, adding something slightly out of ordinary and mysterious into the mix. I like the continued mentions of Sisuca of course, and it's a rather damning statement from Marica when she misinterprets Liu's insinuation and flusters, “Shame on you, Liu! She’s my sister! I would never-“

    Afterwards, there's also a nice mention when Marica and her dress is covered with Tsugu's clingy spooge and he mentions, "Sisuca likes to wear my cum," creating another raunchy scene with just a simple note.

    Out of the ideas you mention at the end, I like the Ramin and Rina/Eilie/Riou/Jowy ones most.

    And thanks for the props, you're welcome! I would also be quite pleased to see your continuation to "Good Clean Fun", though you could also use a different time and a new orgy besides a direct continuation. Most of my stories are actually open for new chapters by other authors, and I have considered proposing that all of my Suikoden stories are available to other authors for continuation, even potentially unfinished ones. Good Clean Fun should already be open for adding additional chapters. Feel free to contact me at thestreti@gmail.com if you wish to discuss further.
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