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Reviews for Holding On

By : jadedragon83
  • From brainfear on October 30, 2010
    Wow that last chapter amazing. The crazy orgy was hot even though it was non-con.

    I'm seriously craving more!

    Ch6
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  • From AntiDolorifico on April 09, 2010
    Heyyy... I saw you on here today. You better be plannin' on some updates... or else! Well, can't really deliver a valid threat here, but uh... if you don't update, I will... chew on my own foot?

    *wub*
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  • From Jakuro on April 07, 2010
    Oh my this is fantastic, I'm glad to see you added more.. but please, please finish this, its so fantastic and very smoothly written, you didn't lose me for a moment.
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  • From dawbygirl on March 15, 2010
    So glad to see another chapter! Nice the way the abstraction of Lilla is finally really pulled in as the third point of a love triangle in the real world. Can't wait for more.
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  • From dawbygirl on January 17, 2010
    I was waiting sooooo long for the next installment of this! Then, once I saw that you'd posted an update, I had no time to sit and read the new chapter until this afternoon. Torture! I think I've said this before, but I love your main character. He's so real and likable, not a hunk of meat.
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  • From bushviper on January 15, 2010
    Let's see if it will take this time...

    I have re-read the fishing seen oh about 20 times. I can't tell you how much I love this chapter. I've tried, but my reviews keep being eaten which I choose to take as a sign that they were inadequate. *sighs*

    This was lovely, sweet, exciting, fun... I never would have hoped for this kind of chapter from this particular story, based on the beginning. It's a testament to your talent that you can breach such a gap and make it not only feel natural, but completely engrossing. LOVE IT MOAR PLZ.
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  • From brainfear on January 12, 2010
    Great! So uh, will Zin ever meet this mystery woman?

    ch5
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  • From bushviper on December 06, 2009
    Heh, I think I have a love/hate relationship with this story... I love Zin, love Cassara, love your beautiful writing, love the unusual plot... HATE ROLF! HATE HIS NASTY HOUSEKEEPER! HATE WHAT HE DOES TO LILLA! Hate that I think it's kind of hot...

    I find myself thinking back to this story rather often. Lilla's diary is *very* hard for me to read, but like your characters, I want to know what's become of her and how she endured her terrible ordeals. Zin is charming and sexy as only a troll can be, and Cassara really surprised me with her quirky cuteness.

    And did you say his cousin is named... Atal? Hmmmmm does he know his cousin has a knife to his throat? Hahaha.

    I know it's been months since you updated and I am surprised to find that I didn't review this months ago... Lilla's story is so sad and disturbing that sometimes I have trouble coming back to it, but I always do, and continually hope for more. Please keep writing!
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  • From Redmaple on September 10, 2009
    This story and your writing is an inspiration to me. Believe it or not, whenever I have a crappy day I re-read this and it makes me hope for something better. Absurd, isn't it? Take your time but do update! Thank you for the story.
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  • From Neferius on August 13, 2009
    You've got a very interesting story brewing here. I'm one of those readers who doesn't mind the slower parts of stories si I say 'Get in your details and allow yourself to tell a story'. I pretty sure people are just as fascinated with Lillia as Zin is so I hope to see more soon
    Read ya Later
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  • From AntiDolorifico on June 06, 2009
    I officially have a big crush on this story. Your use of language is beautiful, your writing and the way you weave sentences is excellent. My only complaint would be that there's not nearly enough of this story yet. Write MOAR! Hehe. Stellar work.
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  • From dawbygirl on June 03, 2009
    Yay! I actually enjoyed having a whole chapter to spend with the main character. I also am entertained by the newest addition to the cast. xD She's adorable.
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  • From dawbygirl on May 13, 2009
    Wow, Rolf is quite the kink. Great follow-up chapter, but I hope we get to see more of Zin in the next one!
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  • From dawbygirl on May 11, 2009
    I hope you continue this story! I enjoy your writing very much, as well as your main character.
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  • From Shinotenshi81 on May 11, 2009
    I loved it. I'm really looking forward to more.
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