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Reviews for All That Glitters

By : sillyneko345
  • From GMB on November 03, 2010
    Loved this chapter....Samos is in TROUBLE! Poor Dax almost Lost his new toy...*wink, wink*
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  • From ANON - dos on October 08, 2010
    I. LOVE. This. Story. Seriously. It's the best Jak/Daxter fic I think I have EVER read, even if it's AU. IT IS AMAZING. Expect fanart. I really hope you continue to write this. :'3
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  • From ANON - Danielle on July 30, 2010
    yay for the update! i adored Erol's story and attempted rape, loved Jak and Dax's "scene" and lol'd at the outtakes. again. you should never end this story. the impending end is the only thing that saddens me.
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  • From Kuromei on July 27, 2010
    An Erol with the hots for Jak... *shudder* That's scary, man. Perfect for this story, too! X3 lol And Daxter almost let slip a biiiig secret. X3 *giggle* If Jak only knew...

    Still, here's hoping the boys can get back into the city. Although it's sounding like there's some big shit that's gonna go down, in the coming chapters... Oh, man, I can't wait! XD
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  • From ANON - Jesa on July 27, 2010
    Delicious plot with a side order of comic relief and smut for dessert. My favorite~
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  • From GMB on July 27, 2010
    Love the story.
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  • From TaintedEmerald on July 26, 2010
    Alright, an update!

    Been looking forward to this for a while, and it was definitely worth the wait. Great plot development, and a nice bit of lemon and fluff at the end. As always, impeccable grammar and spelling And I can only imagine the look on Erol's face when he finds out his bargaining chip just walked out of camp.

    I'm wondering wow you're planning on ending this in one chapter though. What with the army camping outside Spargas and all that.


    Well, thanks for completing the chapter for us. Now we've just got the ending to wait on. I was wondering though, once you finish with this and Small Favors, what were you planning on working on next? Just curious.


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  • From ANON - Danielle on June 06, 2010
    this is such a great story! i can't wait for your update. it's been about a month, i think, since i originally read this. i love it lots. you're in my favorites!
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  • From TaintedEmerald on May 07, 2010
    A well placed plot twist, I must admit. And with a hot little alley scene as a bonus :)

    Anyways, looks like things have turned even worse for our heroes. First they're outnumbered, and now their prince is taken as a hostage. Hope Dax is able to do something about this mess.

    Great chapter, as usual. Don't stress too much on the plot now, take it easy if you have to. Especially with finals coming up soon (or are yours over already?). Either way, good luck with the writing!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on May 06, 2010
    O___o Traitors! Traitors in the ranks! Those little rat bastards. >(

    *sniffle* What'll happen to Jak? ;^; Hell, how will Daxter fare when Samos and Damas recognize him? XP

    Dude, I SO cannot wait until the next update. X3 But I will. =3 See you next time. ^w^


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  • From manawolf on May 02, 2010
    Rooting for Erol to molest Jak in 3... 2...
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on March 19, 2010
    Yay! UPdate! And I love cliffhangers. X3 More than I should, but I keep coming back for more, anyway. XD

    And I love how Daxter remains such a mystery. Of course, I'll love it when he actually has the time to tell his story, but until then watching Jak cope with the fact that his lover isn't entirely human oughta be fun. X3
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  • From TaintedEmerald on March 04, 2010
    Short but sweet. I was kinda miffed when you cut the romance short, but it's good to move the plot along as well I suppose. It seems that this war is starting to heat up a bit, and I'm wondering just what part our mysterious Ottsel friend is going to play in it. I'm interested in how you're planning on doing the fighting scenes as well.

    Anyways, keep on it! I'm sure it'll turn out great.
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  • From ANON - Csi Forsythe on February 24, 2010
    Torn: (bangs on the door) Jak! I need your help with something very important!

    Jak: What is it now?!

    Torn: Actually, I forget. I was hoping you could remind me. It does seem like there was something important I had to tell you… Come to think of it, remind me to turn off the stove in my quarters before the fighting starts, would you? I’d hate to forget and leave it on. Again.

    Daxter: Is this guy for real?

    Jak: Unfortunately…

    Torn: Don’t worry, I’ll think of it!

    X3

    Excellent chapter as usual.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    *sets up camp*
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  • From ANON - Meh on January 29, 2010
    I'm so amuzed and intrigued! Please write more! I'm totally enjoying this story :)
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