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Reviews for All That Glitters

By : sillyneko345
  • From Sione on June 10, 2009
    Aww, you’re too sweet, how could I not enjoy this. This is awesome, and what I have patiently (kind of XD) been waiting for! And it’s just as good as I hoped!

    I must agree with the other reviews that you made a good job of keeping everyone in character. AU can definitely be fun to read but it’s a shame to alter the characters so much that you can’t recognize them anymore. They are still the same people but just in different settings. So good job of keeping them as they should be!

    And Jak you horny dog! He’s so excited about the whole thing that he completely miss out on how Daxter feels about the whole thing! And did he miss the part about, get it out of your system and not see your friend anymore after that, he seems to be so excited over the night that he can’t see beyond it. Well, I sure did notice that comment of Damas, I don’t think Jak would be too happy about that. He should really pay more attention!

    I feel so sad for poor Daxter who is scared to death. Though, I’m pretty sure when Jak sees that his little friend isn’t that keen on the whole idea he will change his mind pretty quickly. I’m in no doubt that Daxter’s puppy eyes will win over even Jak’s raging hormones. Oh but I’m worried for Daxter, I hope he will be alright by the time Jak finds him, if he’s not, I think our foolish Jak will have a ton of regret to deal with.

    And yay, outtakes! Poor Torn! XD Mmm, yummy, chicken wing. *walks away, munching happily.*

    Please don’t make us wait too long for the next chapter, I must see how all this turns out!

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  • From TaintedEmerald on June 09, 2009
    You never cease to amaze me. I don't know how you do it, but with each new fic your writing just gets better and better. For something that was your first AU, it still managed to capture the essence of the series and the characters 100%.

    First off, it was sheer genius to switch Jak and Daxter's usual role (making Dax mute), and it really surprised me that you were still able to make Daxter seem so much like Daxter without his normal witty remarks. Heck, you even managed to sneak some Ottsel mannerisms into the mix! Not only that, but I think it made him absolutely adorable (not that I don't enjoy the witticisms and sarcasm), he just seems so damned cute in this version.

    And Jak's personality...well, let's wait till the next chapter to learn more about that shall we ;). So far it fits with his usual straightforward attitude about things, and the private scenes between him and Dax so far were, again, so damned cute! It's not enough to call it fluff, it's more like concentrated-nitro-fluff. You've definitely evolved in this area.

    The setting and the story so far is enough to make me want more from the get go (hint, hint). You managed to establish most of the backstory rather easily in one chapter, as well as ease us into the AU versions of Jak and Daxter. I can see this expanding into a lot of things though, this story really seems to have potential. What with Jak being the sole heir, his engagement to Keira, Damas's ultimatum concerning Daxter, the army, and that collar...

    You know, if I could suggest an outtake for you, what if that collar was holding back something that Samos truly fears beyond all else: Daxter's voice. Just a funny thought, as I'm sure it's much more than that. I also like Daxter being the quiet one for once and hope it goes on for this fic.



    Anyways, I'm very eagerly awaiting the next installment for this series. I must ask though, about how long do you think this one will be? You've got some wonderful premises in there, so keep up the great work!



    (Also, if you don't mind my asking, why not allow anonymous reviews? I know criticism can be harsh at times, but I'm certain that there are tons of people out there who enjoy your work but don't have, or want, to make an account on the either of the sites. It kinda saddens me to see such good writing go without all the praise it deserves. If you've got your own reasons though, then don't mind me at all.)

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