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Reviews for Son of the Moon

By : Zelphie
  • From ausyandy on August 26, 2009
    This is a great story! Truly Great!

    Very funny stuff going on too.

    Bloody awesome!
    Hope to read more!
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  • From LostinThought8 on August 25, 2009
    YAY, SORA AND RIKU FINALLY KISSED AND DECIDED TO BE A COUPLE!!!!! (I assume. At least they kissed.) :D :D :D (squee squee squee) I was reading this and thinking "something's gotta give, they can't keep going along like this..." And then they kissed, and I jumped up and yelled, and now my dad is looking at me funny and I DON'T EVEN CARE BECAUSE IT WAS AWESOME. :)

    I have a feeling Axel coming over for dinner will be humorous. For some reason I felt Roxas' section of this chapter was funnier than Sora's, probably because I can relate to Sora's fears of growing up and using people as an escape. (I'll admit I've done that, who hasn't, really?) But I laughed when he and Axel met, especially when he thought Axel's head was on fire. It was so sweet. 8D I can see him doing that.

    I can't wait for the AkuRoku goodness in the next chapter! :) And I love Roxas' Deathmobile too. From now on I shall know Roxas as Deathman! Danananana DEATHMAN!!! (giggle)

    My two favorite Killers songs are "Human" and "When You Were Young." "Spaceman" isn't bad, though. ;)

    I find "questionable sanity with love interest" to be much hotter than an age difference. I mean, when I'm reading FanFiction, age is just a number and unless writers make a character 20 years older than their love interest (and they usually don't) it's not a big deal. But questionable sanity with love interest makes for much more compelling plots and character interactions. :)

    Riku IS crazy, isn't he? He isn't as awesome as Sora. I am a Sora fangirl. SORA RULEZ!!!! ^^
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  • From LostinThought8 on July 28, 2009
    I like The Killers too, so I love how you're using all these Killer songs. Nice to see another fan. (Or really, someone just using song lyrics I KNOW.) Will you use "Human" at any point? (That's my favorite Killers song)

    Poor Axel and Riku, so CONFUSED!!! XD It amuses me. Very much so.

    This is still an awesomely amazing story, best I've read in awhile. Keep up the fantastic work!!
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  • From MegumiSparx on July 26, 2009
    Loooove it~! Was so excited to see the update! And I love how you've woven the angst in here; it's very...fresh? I mean, the way you use it is how it would come about in real life, where we don't have omnipotent narrators. It's very believable angst.

    And awww...Axel pelting Roxas with sugar cubes. xD That's so adorable, not gonna lie. But, like I said...my friends are theatre people, and we like gestures of affection that are outside the norm.

    And no, we didn't manage to light it on fire in my 4years of highschool theatre...not for lack of trying, though. :3 There were some close calls, though- between candles, dry-ice bombs, pyrotechnics (which almost set PEOPLE on fire), amongst other things. Ah, theatre...
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  • From MegumiSparx on July 20, 2009
    YES! I was so excited to see another chapter up! I check practically every day, I love it that much. ^o^

    Haha, I know from experience that stage + fire = BAD THINGS. Candles like to ignite every possible source around them...including the "map" I was placing on the fireplace mantle in my senior show. Yeeeeah, bad idea. But hey, that's what the fire curtain is for! :D
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  • From LostinThought8 on July 19, 2009
    "I like fire!!!"

    I think that one was my favorite line. :D Made me crack up.

    Really, this story is fabulous. I don't know what to say, it's just so amazing!!! Everyone's in character, you balance angst and humor so well...AWESOMENESS. This may be the best KH fic on AFF. Lyk Srsly. ;)

    Please keep going with this, or I'll be very very sad.
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  • From ansatsushaxiii on July 07, 2009
    lol I like this chapter and the handbag thing, haha! I remember hating Macbeth too, I so feel for Riku for not liking Macbeth. I have a little suggestion, though: I think it would be better to keep the author's notes in the bottom instead of interrupting the story midway through.
    Anyhow, great job and I hope to see more~!
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  • From ANON - Elle on July 06, 2009
    This story is my new addiction; I love it. The best part is how...normal...everyone seems to me. xD Maybe I just hang out with some weird people...but seriously, I cannot WAIT for the next chapters.
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  • From LostinThought8 on July 06, 2009
    ^_^

    What a fabulously awesome story. You balance funny and angst so well, and fit the song lyrics in well too. NIC JOB, KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT AND AMAZING WORK.
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  • From ansatsushaxiii on July 05, 2009
    lol. Nice job! I love the humor. Keep up the good work!
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  • From LostinThought8 on July 01, 2009
    OMGZ this is like an awesome story of awesomeness. I love the "Killer" lyrics, Roxas' hearse, all the Soriku interactions-Riku caring for sick Sora was just adorable-and Axel's Naked Cowboy thing. This is a great story, please keep going with it!
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi of KISproductions on June 25, 2009
    I'm really liking this darling :) keep up the fantastic work, your writing style is so original and perfect. The lyrics never hurt. I'll be checking back for updates, but take your time and make it how you want it to sound like. It's a glorious start.

    -Kyuubi, editor and programmer of KISproductions
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