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Reviews for Control

By : Taffy217
  • From noezel7 on August 26, 2009
    No later do I review the 6th chapter, I then realilze that the epiloge is already up!! Leon truly broke my heart. You could feel how lonely and utterly hepless he felt. I loved that he then tried to give Tifa the freedom that he couldn't get for Cloud or himself. I wonder how he's going to survive under Sephiroth. I guess that's up to my imagination!! Thank you once again for writing this. It's not everyday that a reader gets something so unique and well written. I will continue to follow your writing. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From noezel7 on August 26, 2009
    .....*cries*. You know, despite the fact that I'm really sad about Cloud dying the way he did, I'm glad that you didn't make it all hearts and smiles. Not everyone gets their happy ending. Cloud did get to spend his last moment with Leon, and that's what really matters. I don't think Leon is quiet broken yet. It's more like he's finally made his decision. I'm hoping he goes after Sephiroth and gets Tifa away. I'm glad that my reviews keep you going. I wish more people would reveiew a good story like this one. I can't wait to read the epiloge and any other stories that you decide to publish!!
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  • From noezel7 on August 13, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter. I want so badly for Cloud and Leon to get away safe and sound, but I think something is going to happen to Cloud. I love the moment where Leon is standing at the door, stunned. It showed how desperatley he wanted Cloud to have a normal life, even if he couldn't. I can't wait for chapter six!! Keep up the good work, sweetie!!
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  • From noezel7 on August 02, 2009
    I really can't believe nobody has reviewed this! This story is written with what appears great thought. Usually, if Cloud is potrayed as the bottom, authors make him really feminine and unable to do anything for himself. You gave him inner strength and a mind of his own!! Leon is also wonderfully written. He may be a soldier, but you give him enough backstory to give the readers a reason why he is and why he was cruel to Cloud in that brief moment. I hope you don't get discouraged from lack of people reviewing this. This story is so wonderful and I would hate to see it go away. Keep writing and I'll follow you until the end!!
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