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Reviews for Parallax

By : fortunesque
  • From Nightodie on May 09, 2010
    Fort, That was really great. Can't wait to find out what was in the bag! I like how he reverts back to character at the end, that was really nice. Your doing fantastic. Thank you!!!
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  • From ANON - Jemina on April 24, 2010
    I am in love with your story!!
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  • From ANON - crimsonrhodelia on April 24, 2010
    I loved this chapter. Kaidan's relationship with his family is extremely plausible. You did an excellent job at portraying the disconnect and discomfort between them. His response to Liara's question on what it's like to have a father was heart wrenching (I love their friendship!).
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  • From ANON - Scarlet Heroine on April 24, 2010
    Another great chapter! Wonderful use of humor in the story; I found myself giggling out loud reading certain conversations. I love how you have progressed their relationship with one another; innocent flirtations giving way to an all out love affair. Just love the steamy stuff. I liked the inclusion of Kaidan's relationship with his family in the current chapter; gives me a new outlook on him. Can't wait to see what Shepard has in her bag of tricks in the upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Cypher on April 24, 2010
    Heeey Fort its me from the boards... :) really like your fic so far! drunk giggly sheko and kaidan got high?? Squeeeeee!!
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  • From ANON - Trish on April 12, 2010
    I just caught wind of this story on FF.net and decided to come over here and read it because I enjoy the steamy bits. :-) I love how you've written the characters, starting off as friends and then moving onto something more. And there have been quite a few times where I've had to stifle my laughter as I'm reading, lest my roommates try to find out why I'm laughing so hard. (The 'Small Ferret' sequence and Liara's queries about it being some of my favorite moments) This is a fantastic story and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - crimsonrhodelia on April 11, 2010
    You write sexy fic SO WELL. I love, love, love horny Kaidan! ...And now I miss my ex-boyfriend.
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  • From ANON - fgd on March 12, 2010
    looooove this

    so much :)
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  • From sablebliss21 on March 11, 2010
    I'm really enjoying your story, I find the humor especially amusing. "Can I borrow some sugar?" was probably one of my favorite lines! I could never write a 'funny' story, my talent lies more in the angst department...more power to you for being able to make me laugh!

    I also wanted to say thank you for your reviews on my story...it's been so long since I've posted a fan fiction I forgot how nice it is to hear other people's critisms, good or bad. Just so you know, your enthusiasm was my motivation for finishing 'That Blurred Line' so quickly, and I've already started the sequel! The first chapter should be up by tonight if I'm lucky.

    Hope to see more chapters for 'Parallax' soon!
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  • From ANON - Jac on March 09, 2010
    I normally lurk but I know it's nice to get reviews, so I'm coming out of lurkerdom to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. It has made me actually laugh several times, which is rare for me when I'm reading. Hope to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2010
    Just to say, I thought your story was great! I was laughing the whole way through! Loved it and thank you. : )
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  • From ANON - B. on February 14, 2010
    Another great chapter, really sexy too. Thanks for writing about this paring especially after how things went down on Horizon in ME2. I love Kaidan and Shepard together.
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  • From ANON - Excalibur on February 12, 2010
    it was awesome. i love mass effect as well.
    kaiden is an awesome character. but having carth's voice makes it better.
    bioware is the shitttt! XD
    please make the next chapter soon. your a great writer.
    i'm so impatient for the next bit, :P

    Excalibur
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  • From ANON - L. on January 31, 2010
    Great story, it's cute and you have a great way of writing in humor (a skill that isn't easily developed). Will this be going all the way through to the beginning of ME2 (now that the game's out) or are you striking out on your own story?
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  • From ANON - ladywater2010 on January 21, 2010
    I'm so glad that you have up-dated!! I hope that your new apartment gets you in the mood for more awesome chaps!
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