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  • From ANON - ladywater2010 on January 05, 2010
    Very sexy and I love it! Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2009
    Ahh! This is sooo good! I can't wait until your next chapter! I love the relationship you've built between Shep and Kaidan. And the "borrow some sugar" line... totally classic. I really like the way you've developed Kaidan, since we don't get alot of insight as to who he really is in the game. Great job! =)

    MOAR... please!
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  • From ANON - Uilleand on December 17, 2009
    I'm SOOO glad you haven't forgotten this story! I fluffing love your Shep so damn hard...and the tension between these to is going to freaking KILL me very soon...
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  • From ANON - Michelle67 on November 11, 2009
    All hail the cockroach. Thank goodness it led to a little action between the two even if it was only a tease. Hopefully a preview of what will eventually come.

    Loved the banter between them in the mako about Kaidan's driving.

    Handcuff's...yes kinky Kaidan ...but then I always thought he was kinda kinky after the Asari fetish comment.

    Left tire then right tire...I love it...driving that mako drove me crazy...I always thought they should have had some conversation in the game about it and I really like yours.

    Loved the last line.

    An absolute delight as usual. Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Longtime Reader on November 10, 2009
    Like with all your fictions, this story is well written and holds the interest well. It’s an engaging plotline and the character development is good with it, as will all your stuff. However, I’m finding myself reluctant to allow myself to get involved with it.

    My problem is this… I’ve followed your work for years now, since I discovered them and I have the fear that all your Mass Effect fictions will go the way of the stories you have written in the Inuyasha fandom and be left to die out with never being finished. Don’t get me wrong, I adore you work but to be left hanging for so long waiting for endings for things is frustrating to the nth degree. As you know, fan fiction has the bane of things never getting finished so when you find a good author you hope that they will be the one to finish what they start. But, sadly, that isn’t usually the case. This is my problem with your new stories as well. I adore them but find that I am leery to get involved for the above stated reasons.

    Don’t take this as a flame, that was never my intent. But I hope you understand what I’m trying to say.

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  • From ANON - Michelle67 on October 25, 2009
    Gotta say I just clicked on not expecting anything and was delighted to find that you had written a new chapter. Finally a real kiss. You really know how to build the anticipation. This is the best Mass Effect shipper fic I've ever read. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - B, on October 25, 2009
    Yay! Another awesome chapter. You're really good at creating scenes between Shepard and Kaiden that show both lust and affection for each other. I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - Michelle67 on October 20, 2009
    Your story is wonderful. I love the way Kaidan and Shepard play off each other. I never saw the possibility of Shepard practically being an alcoholic and pulling Kaidan into it with her but the way you wrote it made it surprisingly believable. A really enjoyable read. I love the relationship they have.I will definitely be checking back to see where you go with the story.
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  • From ANON - B. on October 02, 2009
    LOL! This chapter was hilarious, esp the scene when Shepard and Kaiden were giving Murray that stare-down. Pure jokes! I love how u keep the story funny and sexy at the same time. You add a whole new dimension to Shepard and it's still believable that she defeated Saren. And you've done great at keeping Kaiden in character. I love this story, keep up the great work :D
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  • From ANON - Avid reader, too shy to give an alias on September 19, 2009
    First, I'm glad that you understand that not a lot of people review...especially on this site. And thank you for that. A lot of people tend to appriciate the more 'mature material' if you will, from a distance. I happen to be no different than these masses most of the time. Hell, most all of the time.

    But, I decided to be brave this once and at least give a review, if an anonymous one.

    I have been enjoying this fic more and more with each chapter, it's amazing! And by far my favorite in the Mass Effect section. I love your Shepard, she's not overly nice but she's not overly mean. She's tough, but fun about it... if that makes any sense. And your Kaidan. Oh. God. He makes me laugh just as much as he turns me on. You give just the right amount of suggestiveness without it feeling cheap, and a dash of humor to either break the tension or add more to it.

    And..I couldn't be happier that you've added Liara into the mix. She's love in its purest form and to have her so sheltered and confused at the same time is most certainly her nature indeed. I loved the situation with the ferret refrence, I had to bite my hand to keep from roaring at how great it was.

    Please keep going with this fic. The more you write the more I want to read. And I hope in kind that my review gives some kind of encouragement for you to do so.
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  • From ANON - B. on September 14, 2009
    Awesome chapter. I'm so glad ur continuing with the story, its so good. Please keep up the good work :D
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  • From ANON - Storm on August 16, 2009
    I must admit I've been lurking while reading this (reading without reviewing) And even though I did try to leave a review the first time; the power went out and I lost the review and I was too tired to bother with restarting this old sluge of a pc, so you get this instead. Funny, funny! This is the funniest ME fic I have ever read and its good too plus all the fun of confused and adorable Kaiden. Keep it up and can't wait to see more!

    Oh and happy b-day! The big 2.1. did you have fun drinking? Unless I'm wrong don't most 21st B-days end up with drinks? Hmm, ah well happy b-day anyway! Oh and just a info tip, in my last ME run I got most of my Predator [L M H] Between Ilos and Virmire missions; however, I was sad to find that Tali didn't have any Predator [L M H] but I did find some for the others... Oh does anyone know where I can find a decent guide? Not for the mission or quest really but for the hidden scenes? Well ok so their not really hidden its just easy to miss them. Like the one on the way to get Garrus and Wrex. In the area between the med-clinic and the market place there is a scene to look over the wards which I had only manged to find during my newest play through... heh Um I'm rambling...I'll just shut up now ~_~;
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  • From ANON - K-bear on August 13, 2009
    I'll tell you what.. I'll forgive the long delay if you update very,very soon.. :P Sound fair? I'm anxious to see how their night together goes. :)
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  • From ANON - K-bear on August 06, 2009
    Duuuuuuuuuuuuude! I'm tired of checking this every day to see if you've written! :D

    Hint hint.

    Trust me, this is a form of flattery. :P I WANT MORE!

    NOW, DAMN YOU, NOW!!
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  • From ANON - River on August 03, 2009
    I normally can't stand Liara but you even made her scenes hilarious enough that I actually decided she wasn't so bad! Oh please write more, this is so great. Seriously, how, in the name of all that is holy, did you manage to make Shepard so hilarious and quirky while still making it believable that she saved the freaking universe?
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