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Reviews for Parallax

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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 31, 2009
    That is just way too funny!!! Poor Liara!! Handcuffs and blindfolds. Crazy wonderful!
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  • From ANON - K-bear on July 29, 2009
    Very good. The snack scene was very well written. :) My only wish is that this chapter had come sooner in succession to the last one. ;-)

    Hint. Hint. :P
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 22, 2009
    I loved it!! It was hillarious! Poor Kaiden. Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Bexx on July 20, 2009
    I'm in love with Mass Effect too!

    Lovely written with a fabulously wicked mischievous Shepard. ;)
    I only wish you'd written more! :D
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  • From ANON - K-bear on July 18, 2009
    So.... Here's a review:

    WRITE. MORE. SOON!

    Now... you tell me if that increases the speed of the writing process... :D
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  • From ANON - HealerAriel on July 14, 2009
    D'awww, Kaiden's so cute under the influence of alcohol and painkillers. Seems pretty feasible for the character, too.
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  • From ANON - River on July 13, 2009
    Oh God, write more. The first chapter was really good and the second was... well, comic gold. Seriously, I laughed through it, massively funny (which is something I think can be very tricky to do in writing, especially about Mass Effect).
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 12, 2009
    LOL!!! Getting stoned off of meds. Completely in the dark about what's going on. It's wonderful!!! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 03, 2009
    I love Mass Effect. Having read that little tidbit, joined with the fact that I fell in love with Kaiden, I love the first chapter. I'm anxious to see where you go with it.
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