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From Nozer112 on September 14, 2009
A nice ending to a great story. Looking back through it...Wow, there's just plenty of room for more to be written. I'm really going to be keeping my eyes open, looking for more of your stuff. You're a great writer, I can't wait to see what you put up next!
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From ANON - mikey on September 13, 2009
nice i love the ending heh i wish there was a little more about the new settlement wich it mise well be im sure ppl are gonna want to live there lol but ohwell amazingly wonderful story and i think its the first complete in the falloutsection good work
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From Nozer112 on September 05, 2009
Yay, Autumn is dead! And about time...Anyway, great chapter, as usual. Is this the next to last chapter, or do you have more shapters planned for this?
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From Nozer112 on August 23, 2009
Wow, didn't see that twist with Athena coming...

Anyway, I really, really want to read more. And I'm really hoping for a happy ending. If I'm any good at judging characters, if Sarah does die, then I just don't think Anya can live with it without basically going way back down the Bad Karma route...

Anyway, now I wanna see if Athena can be redeemed, and what happened to the others.
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From ANON - Novacain on August 22, 2009
Just wanted to say that this story has been fantastic, I've been wanting some serious Fallout 3 Femslash, and Lone Wanderer/Sarah is a great option. I'm not expecting a happy ending, sadly, but still, it's in chraacter, so I can't complain!
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From Nozer112 on August 17, 2009
Anya's luck sucks, huh? Anyway, another great chapter. I really have to learn how to critic better, as I would love to be able to actually give suggestions that would help...But as I read this, everything looks just fine to me. I'm really curious as to who these Reavers are though, with all the mythological and religious babble. I've always liked mythology, and I really like Athena's name...Heh, I wonder if she shares her namesake affinity for fighting.

Anyway, I definitely can't blame you for not including Mothership Zeta...I actually was stupid enough to buy it, and yeah, it isn't that great. I figured at least you might learn a bit about the war, but aside from some medics abducted from Anchorage...Nothing. Oh well.

But keep up the good work! Can't wait now to see what's happened with the rest of Anya's party, and how things with Athena work out. Hopefully Anya's luck with this new friends doesn't end like how it has with Lucy, Hoss, and Moira (I know she wasn't killed, but that friendship kinda poofed, didn't it?).
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From Nozer112 on August 04, 2009
I really need to think of better ways to describe these chapters, or at least learn how to offer contrustive criticism...But I'v enever been a good critic unless it was my own work, and in those instances, everything I wrote was horrible.

Anyway, another awesome chapter, and one that made my day with the Sarah and Anya scene. If Fallout 3 was actually designed to have romance options (actual ones, not the crazy Clover chick and the other crazy one in Big Town) I don't see anyway that Sarah wouldn't be one of them. Though, I was a bit disappointed that Cherry wasn't killed. I didn't like her in the game, really didn't like her after what she did in this story, but...Oh well.

Now, I have a random question for you. Are the Point Lookout and Mothership Zeta downlaods going to affect the story? Just wondering, feel free to ignore the question. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!
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From Nozer112 on August 01, 2009
While I had been hoping to see what Anya would do to Bannon for the stunt he pulled, now...Dang, Colonel Autumn. At least, I think it was Colonel...Been a whil.e since I played the game. Anyway, great chapter. Somehow I knew the Brotherhood would pull something like that with Anya. It always seems to happen in situations like that. And yay, Sarah showed up!

I'm really enjoying this story, so keep it up! You're doing a fantastic job and I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2009
Given Anya's contributions to the Brotherhood of Steel, its highly strengthened position in the Wasteland thanks to the salvaged Enclave technologies and weapons, Anya's honorary position as a Lyon's Pride member, Elder Lyons's morals-first approach to governing and military strategies, the lack of military organization and weapon technologies of the slavers in and around Paradise Falls, and the BoS's familiarity of Anya's effectiveness as a one-person attack squad, it's HIGHLY out of character for Elder Lyons or Sarah to deny Anya's request on those grounds--or to conceal any secret motives to deny her request. Everything else is in this chapter and the rest of the fic is good and characteristic of the game's characters, but that part is completely off from what the game shows us. Good chapter other than that, though. Look forward to the next. Stupid Autumn.
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From Nozer112 on July 28, 2009
Ooooh, ouch...That was an interesting twist. I can't wait to see what type of hell Anya rains down on Bannon for that. And Cherry. After that I'm really hoping that Anya finds that one special person. For now, I'm going to put my vote in that it'll be Sarah. I really hope it's Sarah...

Anyway, great job again, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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From ANON - Hey on July 28, 2009
Whoa whoa whoa there mangs. I love this fic, I can't wait to read the next chapter, I really hope Sarah Lyons and the Lone Wanderer get romantically involved like they should have had the option to in the game. But be cool, fools, the reviewer's got a point. Rape's not unusual for the CW, but that doesn't mean you don't have to warn about it. By the very simple rules of the site, you should be listing the types of potentially offensive content in your fics by your story tags. If someone's surprised and put off by finding rape in a fic that DOES have the nonconsensual tag, then that's their own fault. But if they're surprised and put off by finding rape in a fic that doesn't have any indication that it's involved in the summary or at least chapter notes, that's the AUTHOR'S fault. It's not out of place in a Fallout 3 fic, but that has NOTHING to do with whether the story should have a warning about it. Be rad, chads, don't hate a guy just cuz he's right.
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From ANON - mikey on July 28, 2009
oaky first off pulverizer what the hell did you expect in a world like the capitol wastland? and biseds that kinda stuff is hot heh but anyway awesome storry man keep up the good work i love the long chapters and that its not pureley smut i cant wait to see how this played out heh allthough i was thinking that being brought up in a vault anya would know enouge about the slave coller to disarm it i mean think about it most peopl in the capitol wastland arent very educated in since and mecahnices so its probaly a very simple mechinisem with a radio reciver and a presure sensor to detecht if its being forced off and all you have to do it snip the wires without triginging the sensor basic concet
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From ANON - pulverizer on July 28, 2009
Damn, I had liked the first chapter, but didn't see the rape coming in the second. I would have expected some violence and angst considering FO3 is all gloomy and dystopian, but I would have certainly skipped the fic if NonCon had been one of the warnings. Please put it in the fic's, or at least the chapter's summary so that the readers may be forewarned.
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From Nozer112 on July 24, 2009
Amazing first chapter! I was wondering how long it would take Fallout 3 to get a yuri story that doesn't look like it will all be PWP. I like the way that you've tied in all of the things Anya has done from the story, like with the Aqua Pura, fighitng the Enclave, and Maddog's nickname. Plus, with the same she seems to be getting tired of her goodie-goodie life, as she finally starts to realize the asteland isn't really going to change...Anyway, great first chapter and I hope to read more soon.

One a sidenote, I hope you're planning on Anya finding that special someone, but that's just a hopeless romantioc talking, so you can ignore that. Good job, can't wait to read more!
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From Yumberduddle on July 23, 2009
FINALLY!!!!!!! fallout 3 yuri!!!! this is so rad! hot and sexy, but it was all in character and good writen! cant wait 4 the next chapter....and im totaly stoked 4 when sarah shows up, shes teh sex!
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