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Reviews for Tryst

By : jadedragon83
  • From brainfear on October 30, 2010
    Wow! She bore him a child? Holy moly, this sure adds to the intrigue!

    Ch7
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  • From on July 22, 2010
    Please lease please don't let this story be over. I love it, it actually gave me a few thrills. Atal....Atal is a man after my own heart, I totaly relate to him. Please give him a happy ending!!!
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  • From bushviper on January 03, 2010
    OMGGGGGG I love Atal so much. In this chapter I particularly enjoyed the first person POV. His personality and inner monologue are amusing and fucking sexy... I just really love him.

    The new elf is intriguing! I did not expect you to introduce another female at all! I'm so glad to see an update from you and I hope you keep writing.

    Oh also I liked your description of his jealousy... num.
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  • From brainfear on January 03, 2010
    More please!!!!! I'm loving this!

    ch6
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  • From Fiveshades on December 11, 2009
    Yay! an update!! (this is smachitpower from dA, by the way XD) This story is really entertaining for many reasons. First, I love Eruanna and how she has gone from spoiled princess to a woman who can take care of herself. I love her reactions to Atal and the chemistry they automatically share...even when they want to kill each other. He is dead sexy and there's not a whole lot she can do about it except huff an exasperated sigh while wishing he'd grope her! XDXD....I believe one of your illustrations of the two of them show that perfectly ;-) And ye gods! this last chapter! What in the HELL are you trying to DO to them?? LMAO Jazlok sure has perfect timing!!! XD

    Anyway, you are a very gifted writer and I have really enjoyed these two characters. They are so easy to relate to and likable. Please keep writing! Damn, these two are soooo HOT!!
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  • From bushviper on December 09, 2009
    YAY! You updated! Loved this chapter... it's sexy and sweet, a really fun read.

    Bummer about the break in though, haha!
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  • From bushviper on December 06, 2009
    Are you maybe feeling like writing more? Soon please? Excellent!
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  • From AntiDolorifico on October 25, 2009
    WHERE BE NEXT CHAPTER?! *eye twitch*
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  • From trollwink on September 03, 2009
    "I had a cousin that liked to frequent the area, as the fishing was particularly fine, but it was currently out of season."

    Zin the fisherman! :D

    I noticed "boredom" as "bordem" but didn't quite pick up anything else. I was kinda just reading for my own enjoyment though. XDXD
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  • From Redmaple on September 02, 2009
    Thanks for the new chapter. I really liked what Atal said at the end, “I be sensin' a trend here, mon.” Makes my mind ring in anticipation.
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  • From ileyna on August 31, 2009
    Another great chapter! That sucks about the suprise reformat but this is great :D Can't wait to read more!
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  • From AntiDolorifico on August 28, 2009
    I'm going to cry if you don't update soon. Ah, too late. *sob*

    This is what happens when you write WIN stories!
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  • From bushviper on August 15, 2009
    Yay! I'm glad you're writing this. I loved "Of Age and Innocence." The troll's attitude is really funny to me. He has a completely different inner voice than the elf and you've done a wonderful job of fleshing out his personality.
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  • From silenthunder on August 13, 2009
    I gots a dedication! Woot! :)

    You're such a TEASE! It bothers me a little that she doesn't know who he is, but otherwise, awesome :) Am quite cooly and collectively chomping at the bit for more, ha-ha :P
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  • From Britomartis on August 13, 2009
    Woot! More! and TY for the dedication :) I have started a couple hordies myself now, so you might see a few more stories in the future, at least if I can ever finish Cali's. :p
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