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Reviews for Thorough Investigation

By : DonCorneo
  • From karlminion on August 21, 2009
    Is this the end? If it is, it's a good one; nice humor at the end to sign off with.
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  • From CobaltReign on August 18, 2009
    I only read 5 chapters so far, but I thought the story was very good.

    I especially liked how you incorporated the poor dialogue from SFIV's cutscenes into the story, and in a way that made sense.

    Also, I mean this in the nicest way possible, but I thought it was fucking hilarious that Cammy was scared of getting kicked out of Delta Red on a Don't Ask Don't Tell rule. I don't know if that was your intention or not, but that was just devious of Viper.

    Are you going to use Cammy's sex scene as the reason Viper doesn't shoot Cammy at the end of SFIV?
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  • From karlminion on August 17, 2009
    Wow, talk about your revenge. Very hot.
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  • From karlminion on August 16, 2009
    Phone sex ftw. When will Viper and Chun-Li meet up again?
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  • From ninesenshi on August 12, 2009
    Chap4 was a bit drawn out. Erratic and focused on what people did NOT like. I know that not everything is YES YES, during sex, but I would not focus too much on that during fiction, especially in an encounter without much non-con emphasis. Hope to see more. If Viper is going to assault more women prior to Chun-li, how about Rose? Or maybe chun-li can interrogate the gypsy?
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ninesenshi on August 10, 2009
    Going good. Hope to see more.
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  • From karlminion on August 10, 2009
    This is good stuff. Very exciting.

    Keep it up!
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  • From ninesenshi on August 08, 2009
    A fun chapter. Hope to see more. Maybe with fisting...
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ninesenshi on August 07, 2009
    Pretty good. I appreciate Chun-li being hairy. Hope you will write more chapters and continue to have them explore new acts. Further pursue their domme relationship. Keep writing.
    SailorNemesis
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