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Reviews for The World as it Should Be

By : TaurusLizzie
  • From jacquibirdie on November 24, 2009
    sad that it's ended, glad the loose ends are tied up...upset that the heroine is left unsatisfied and giggling that the hero of the piece is out there fornicating his brains out once more...please do keep up the good works
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  • From bushviper on November 10, 2009
    Hmmm it almost feels like a conclusion but I hope you're going to update again. Beautifully written.
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  • From chedorii on November 06, 2009
    Great story! I can't wait for more!
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  • From bushviper on November 02, 2009
    Ooh great chapter, I found myself thinking about this story last week and wondering if Treris would catch up with her sister. More please!
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  • From bushviper on October 27, 2009
    Woah! I did not expect that from the troll. Great chapter!
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  • From bushviper on October 26, 2009
    Poor Vishina! This story is really gripping. The sexy times are very hot, the action is well-written and exciting (I'm jealous! I have trouble with that) and the plot is absorbing and nicely-paced. Really good job.
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  • From bushviper on October 26, 2009
    I knew I remembered Deydis! I loved "Native Tongues" and I'm excited about this one too. You are prolific writer! Lucky readers :)
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  • From jacquibirdie on October 06, 2009
    I know I'm bad for making cliffhanger endings of chapters but...OMFG please don't do that I wanna know what's happening!!!!!!!!!
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  • From superderp on September 30, 2009
    This story is captivating me.
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  • From wisterya on August 26, 2009
    I absolutely love this story! The characters are so alive and expressive. I can't wait for more chapters :)
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  • From silenthunder on August 24, 2009
    Uh-oh. Was it the orc watching them, or someone else? Ah, the suspense!

    Transition between scenes in this chapter was a bit rough - I had a very hard time following it; the story had broken flow. It's not something you usually do, hmm...

    The juicy bits were still good, though :)
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  • From silenthunder on August 16, 2009
    I LOVED Deydis from "Native Tongues", and am thrilled to see his playboy self back in action again :)

    HOT so far, eager for the continuation of this :)

    I'm not quite sure why you don't get more reviews than you do; I adore all your work!
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