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Reviews for Memories of Destiny Islands

By : NiaraAfforegate
  • From ANON - Tsunoba on May 31, 2015
    Ooh, very nice. I just finished chapter 2, and I got a nice laugh out of the ending.

    One thing I would suggest is that you break up your paragraphs with a new line. You did it for some of them (for example, the paragraph ending with "This was it; it was really happening."), but not for all of them. The lines breaks would really help with readability, and helps prevent Wall O'Text Syndrome.
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  • From Iyasu on December 25, 2010
    Good story, I like SoRiKai the best, in all ways, shapes, and forms, because it's just seems that it can work the best out of most of the pairings. I also enjoyed the alternate chapter, even though if I bet they'll be finding sand for the next two weeks. Nice job.
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 20, 2010
    oh wow.
    that last chapter was great.
    i cant wait for another story.
    hahh.
    lol.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 06, 2010
    im loving this story.
    i cant wait to finish the rest.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From AngelMeiru on December 15, 2009
    This story is the type of stuff this site needs. I'm so sick of OOC yaoi pairings. The only reason those girls make the straight guys gay and hero and villain fall in love with each is for one reason: Good looks.

    Like you, I write a story and try to do my character homework. And I don't care if the character is a bishie or a monster, if that character is likeable, I write about him/her.
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  • From Freakgamer on December 14, 2009
    YAH CHICKA HA HA, THANK YOU, FUNNY, SWEET, AND HOT, REALLY HOT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From Freakgamer on December 09, 2009
    BAN, I REALLY LIKE THIS, IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE I READ A GOOD THREESOME KINGDOM HEARTS FIC THAT INVOLVED THE TWO LOVING KAIRI AND NOT HAVING ANY YAOI CONTENT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From megadeth425 on August 11, 2009
    Good story, man, especially as a first offering.
    The threesome would have certainly been a good way to cap it off, but maybe if you try writing something else and coming back to it later, you could rewrite the scene. I get hung up on very small details in stories, but when coming back to it later it becomes easier to do.
    As for the chapters, I prefer a story break up the massive text with logical chapter breaks, and this story was pretty good on that.
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