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Reviews for Cause and Effect

By : JonathanRL
  • From JonathanRL on August 20, 2009
    Lazybird raises an exellent point. This story was written originally as a gift to a friend of mine and as such, I took liberties with the lore that the very least may be frowned upon. For this reasons, I choose to remove two chapters where invented lore set the playground for the following events.

    I can only thank her for noticing this for me, since I daresay I was too blinded to notice it myself until somebody showed me the issue.
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  • From jacquibirdie on August 20, 2009
    ok...I have to stop and get this straight. First...spellcheck is your friend. Please do use it. Secondly while I understand and do use creative licence...a few things you wrote on clearly go so far out of imagined WoW or canon for that matter as to be ...pushing it. Thirdly, while it seems that you know the genre and likely humans, trolls are a lot more complex (I'm very proud of my trolls) and could use a little more research to get right. Other writers on this site likely would be a good read, in order to get them correct.

    I would like to say well written and that it grabbed me but it just did not....
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