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Reviews for Bringing Them All Back Home

By : khfun159
  • From RichardH on September 19, 2009
    his semen tasted like olive oil.... was that a virgin pun?
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  • From karlminion on September 19, 2009
    I am reminded of the Jess Fink webcomic, Chester 5000 XYV; all that was missing was that cheerful little VERT!

    Aside from being short, it was pretty good.
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  • From karlminion on September 14, 2009
    Ohhh boy. It's getting good now!
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  • From salarta on September 14, 2009
    Good two new chapters! I like your using the name of a song on the soundtrack for the third chapter's title. Lucca having invented and using a vibrator was an excellent idea, I've talked with Anonelbe a few times about how eagerly she'd take to using Robo for sex and having him go by R-66Y because it reminds her she's having sex with a wonder of technology.

    I didn't think the Catalack thing was something to get overly concerned about; that's kinda like questioning why Steel Runner is there too. As for nothing much about Crono's mom on here, sadly a lot of writers out there don't think about or want to touch certain characters. Specifically to Chrono Trigger, I can only recall "Chrono Trigger: Loyalty" as any other fics besides mine that star Queen Zeal. Closest I've found of her hentai-wise was a highly suggestive (AND AWESOME) picture of Queen Zeal x Magus lying in bed together. Gina clearly has it worse, it seems like if it's not yaoi then only the overly popular characters and fictional universes that draw in tons of readers will get much attention. But, the people who write about lesser appreciated characters tend to put more heart and effort into it, at least in my reading experience. Looking forward to more chapters, it's enjoyable to read and uplifting to see you writing about a character like Gina.
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  • From karlminion on September 13, 2009
    Haha, kinky couple. Hawt.

    Anyway. I sorta hope this doesn't turn into full-on incest, but I suppose that'll end up the whole point (what with Gina fantasizing about Crono and all). Either way, it'll be fun I bet!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2009
    Catalack is one healthy cat to be alive and running races 20 years later...
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  • From salarta on September 13, 2009
    Thanks for correcting me on Crono's mom's name. I find that sort of stuff out when researching for a story, and always thought she didn't have a name at all. Keep up the good work in the way that feels best to your writing instincts. Specific to the second chapter, I liked how Gina didn't go all the way; sometimes it's more interesting in a story to leave some of it up in the air.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2009
    Wow do I ever look forward to when Gina meets Ayla...as for people to satisfy her until then, I don't suppose Elaine and Lara are free?
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  • From karlminion on September 12, 2009
    I liked this a lot. Keep it going, I can't wait for the next bits!
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  • From salarta on September 12, 2009
    I'm personally more interested in when/if Crono's mother has sex with her son, but this starts off very well. Not entirely sure she needed a name though. I'll keep an eye on this one.
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