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Reviews for Bringing Them All Back Home

By : khfun159
  • From wingsofseyfert on July 18, 2010
    Hey, that bat shit insane acid trip with Dragon Gods just happens to be one of my favorite games of all time! How can you say no to Karsh and Fargo? Lol, anyway, I digress. Again, never thought much of Crono's mother but you seemed to shed a good deal of light onto her and her body. The idea of her being a nympho-maniac her teenage years doesn't surprise me and the fact that she had been so depraved made for some really interesting sex scenes.

    I just wished the last scene with Magus lasted longer, poor fellow, thinking he finally got some pussy when he rammed his damn dick on the wrong hole. Good story and hot overall. And poor Crono completely oblivious to it all.
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  • From Yumberduddle on March 10, 2010
    can i just say that the crono cross joke was fucking awesome
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  • From RichardH on February 23, 2010
    great ending, I hope you make a better story later (though it will be hard to top this)
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  • From karlminion on February 22, 2010
    You'd better do a sequel, is all I have to say. Leaving us hanging like that...

    But seriously, nice work. The final sex scene could have been a little more involved, but oh well.
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  • From karlminion on February 11, 2010
    Girl-on-girl is hot. And you're good at it.

    I suspect the conclusion is drawing near? Can't wait!
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  • From NiaraAfforegate on January 14, 2010
    Woo, an update!! Yay!

    Another excellent chapter. I really like the way you've hooked into how rowdy Lucca seems to get when she lets her hair down (I'm minded of her comments when you attmept to refuse to drink with her at Ayla's party, and how much hidden meaning the words seem to have from her turn of phrase at that point, heheh), and how closeted Marle is underneath, despite her adventuresome spirit.

    One small technical comment for this chapter, and you know I bring them up becuase I lvoe the story you're telling, the phrase, early on:
    "Unsatisfied, Gina groaned and darted up, a bored expression on her face." I know WHAT you're saying, yes, and I understand exactly what you're describing, but at the same time, the words jar with each other in a way that doesn't quite read well, made me double-check it, so it pulls you out of the story reading it.

    Other than that, a great update, glad to see you're still working on this!

    -Niara
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  • From salarta on January 14, 2010
    Hey, sometimes you need to let loose and screw around a bit before you feel comfortable writing. Of course they're out of character from what they're like in the actual game, but I think Chrono Trigger is renowned enough and the setup is in such a way that it doesn't come off like the goal of the fic is "hurr I'm going to make all the women whores just because." In other words, closer to parody and random silliness than anything else.

    I like the truth or dare scenario too; I haven't used it yet myself, but it seems like it would be a fun way to prod for unusual situations with characters with a murky territory between consensual and non-consensual mixed in.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2010
    I almost came just from Lucca licking Marle's feet...please, please make this into a girl orgy next chapter! Or at least have Ayla go to town on Gina!
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  • From NiaraAfforegate on October 01, 2009
    Nice addition with chapter 11. As is often the case with Ayla, there's a lot of smirk-worthy moments, which you brought across well. One small thing though; As far as I can recall, throughout the course of the game, Ayla pretty much never uses any pronouns at all, and for the most part you've mirrored that, but you did have a couple of "Me"s and "Your"s slip in there along the way, which I did find myself noticing.

    Other than that, nice.

    -Niara
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  • From karlminion on October 01, 2009
    I laughed even harder this time than last time! What's next? xD
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  • From salarta on September 27, 2009
    Hi, sorry for not reading in a while. I've been trying to prod myself to do so (and he hasn't left a review, but Anonelbe has been too), but I've been feeling put off knowing some of the limits placed on where it could go. That's understandable though, we all have things we don't want to do, or at least don't have strong enough inspiration for. It's happened to me plenty of times with things people have asked to see.

    In chapter 5, I'm confused on how Gina could see her lust as the cause of Crono's (what appeared at the time to be) death. Maybe I missed or forgot something, but I can't think of anything to suggest it. Robo suggesting the anal intercourse mode made me laugh, and I'm glad you specified it's a function built in by Lucca since I'm starting to feel like Lucca's the only one that feels right as a partner for Robo. Anything else I can say is pretty much taken care of by the votes as well as the number and content of reviews.
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  • From RichardH on September 24, 2009
    and that bump she's gonna have isn't a wart... don't worry, it'll come to you
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  • From NiaraAfforegate on September 24, 2009
    Very excellent so far, quite enjoyable. Also very pleasing to see a fic interested in taking a look at a number of aspects, people and things... You might call it a PWP, but it's a beautifully crafted piece compared to a lot one might find here, heheh. I think you've captured much of the characters in question well, and I only hitched at one or two points that made me hesitate over an action or dialogue... but then, when the purpose is smut, that's really hard to avoid anyway, so very good job there.

    **spoiler tag for those reading the reviews before the fic; skip this paragraph**

    At one point, I found myself getting a bit lost on the physical dynamics; Gina's 'dismount' from Robo, that little sequence, from her initial position (back to the wall, arms and legs around a standing partner), through to final pose (on hands and knees... rear towards Robo?) was hard to follow... Easy to lose track of the actual physical movement there, maybe a better way to describe it? Not to complain, but I've always really noticed dynamics in my own writing, and felt the need to pay close attention to them, so it's what I automatically pick out when reading others.

    **end story specific spoilers**

    Aside from that really enjoying it... I imagine though, Lucca is a bright and perceptive girl... I feel as though, given a couple of things now, she's going to know or work out that _someone_ has been finding (and playing with) things she'd rather they not.

    I find myself wondering just how far along Janus's personal timeline the version of him we met was... Post events at least though, all things considered... which would mean... **giggles** I like the way you work. Makes me want to ditch this thesis I'm working on and get back to the Chrono Trigger fic I'm writing...

    Excellent stuff, keep it up.

    -Niara
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  • From karlminion on September 23, 2009
    Now it REALLY reminds me of Chester 5000 XYV. Except with more ladies.

    If I might make a suggestion... perhaps Gina might be stuck in a closet, with some other people outside doing the dirty?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2009
    dude, this is great stuff. funny as hell and has some lemony promise to it. keep up the good work.
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