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Reviews for A Gambler in Need

By : littleartemis
  • From kittenzuzamaki on June 17, 2011
    Really good story. I loved the concept of the story and the couple was one I had never even considered. But I had one small problem with your story. When referring to Lexaeus as his number you had a tendency to say VI instead of V that was my only issue fix that and you got a keeper kk? I hope this helps greatly.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on October 29, 2009
    I really liked your story, it had a really good plot. But I wanted to let you know you started to call Lexaeus VI when he is V.
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  • From PasuterEnogu on October 24, 2009
    First V/X story I have read, and I must say you are the first story I've read where Luxord didn't have peircings everywhere. XD I did like it, though, and actually might look for more of this pairing. Just something on the side, you started to call Lexaus VI instead of V. Just incase you didn't realize it. :D
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  • From Minamino on October 03, 2009
    It was alright. I had some difficulty picturing Luxord as a more vulnerable man, though. Still, it was good. By the way, a couple of times at the end, you referred to Lexaeus as "VI" instead of "V". Be careful of that.
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