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Reviews for Intimate Rivals

By : Salysha
  • From ANON - HeartfulPeach on February 06, 2010
    CHAPTER 1
    Aww... that was way too cute for me when Hwoarang wished him a good night at the end. I'm liking this story! ^_^
    CHAPTER 2
    This is getting interesting... Still loving this!
    CHAPTER 3
    I just can't believe what I have just read; Jin and Hwoarang, together, in a small bed, cuddling...
    I don't know if it was your intention but that was incredibly cute and fluffy, I loved it!
    CHAPTER 4
    Another "Jin", that made me lol. Jin sure is the caring type XP
    CHAPTER 5
    "This was getting way too mushy"
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  • From ANON - rogueremy on November 26, 2009
    I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet... it's AMAZING!!! Thank God i found it! I've been looking for a decent tekken fanfic for like years now! It's my fave pairing, and the characters have been written really well indeed! I mean they way the tournament's been described with the matches and the bedrooms and stuff is genius. It's really believable that way because of the description of matches, since thats what tekken's about. I can actually see this happening which is an incredible achievement for game fanfic! Jin and Hwoarang have real chemistry in the story and i can believe it all! :) Please continue writing this spectacular story, i mean it gives an original insight into how the actual tournament would be like, which the game itself hasnt ever done! And the romantic scenes are soooo hot, really! Especially the rated M and NC-17 ones, but even aside from those, i enjoyed the other chapters with story development too (which is rare). Spectacular! I noticed that there was a bit of time between the latest chapter and the one before, but i'm hoping you'll continue writing and post soon! Please dont leave it hanging like 90% of other stories here! Oh and definitely continue showing cameos and small parts with other charcters too; i liked Steve's involvement! :)
    Hope to read more soon! :D
    P.S, I never write this long for anyone!
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