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Reviews for Every Heart

By : littleolmee
  • From Chaosmemoria on January 05, 2010
    Heh heh, I THOUGHT it was a dream! :D

    That was very entertaining. I just love the way you write Wizard.
    Keep it up!

    Take care.
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on December 31, 2009
    I've been playing HM: AM nonstop for about a week now and this story kinda spurred me on to find out what the wizard's real name is...You're doing a fantastic job on keeping the characters believable and I loved how you said 'Like his heart was a spring flower blooming for the first time.'. That was a wonderful piece of imagery there and it really made the character feel more human. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on December 30, 2009
    That was good...lol...I can imagine Finn turning that color red as well. You're doing a good job, keep up the good work.
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  • From Chaosmemoria on December 20, 2009
    I really enjoyed this.

    I'm actually pursuing the Harvest King in HM:AP at the moment but I'll have to do Wizard too. I really like your interpretation of his personality. (And I hope you include a scene where he reveals to Hikari his real name. ^^)

    I like how you mentioned a few of the game mechanics and activities. That was fun to read.

    By the way, what does Hikari look like? I'm curious. So far, her personality matches the original meaning of her name really well (not that its matching really matters, but I love it nonetheless). Very caring and kind. You can't get much more "light" and shining than that. ^^

    Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.
    (Please continue!)

    Good luck and Take care of yourself.

    ~~Shiya64
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