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Reviews for Suikoden V - Normal Night for Sialeeds

By : terpfen
  • From terpfen on December 26, 2009
    FlemethsBeard, thank you very much. Glad you liked it!

    You've got an interesting suggestion, but it's well above my skill level at the moment. I wouldn't know how to approach Riou and Lazlo from a personality perspective; I have zero experience with Suikoden III, having played it for five minutes and no longer thanks to my frustration with its plodding pace, so that's a no-go; and lastly, I'd like to avoid writing primarily Suikoden fics. Right now I'm assisting Streti with Repopulating Mist: The After, and after that, we'll see what happens. Alpha Prince is one of the best stories on AFF, though, and I'm honored you compared Normal Night to it. Thank you.

    If you're interested in large members and their interactions with gorgeous women, however, check out my (co-written with Streti!) Breath of Fire II fic, Mixed Blessings. It might tide you over until... well, whatever I do next.
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  • From takeshi37 on December 25, 2009
    Awesome story!

    I loved it.

    So much detail throughout and incredible descriptions.

    Loved all the detail....like Alenia's exasperation and her little dark comment at the end...mentioning bromides of Arshtat in Nagerea....how Arshtat's beauty is known as far as Scarlet Moon... Just lots of little things that make it all come alive!

    Loved how she just causally walked up on Lyon and Faroush fucking. Loved all the descriptions of how sex happens all the time in the palace. The sex bout with Arshtat and Sialeeds was especially hot.

    I especially liked that Faroush had the biggest cock. I liked the way you described it's almost comedic length. Size is really important for me and I loved that you worked it in. Reminds me of Jeane's old story.

    Would love to see more stories from you. About Faroush...or maybe the other Tenkai stars having similar sexual hijinks and well endowed members?
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  • From terpfen on December 23, 2009
    Still, I'm sorry if I set up a false expectation. That wasn't the intention.

    But, going on my recollection of the game, the two don't pair well. Perhaps after Sialeeds' Sacred Games and Gizel's subsequent engagement to her, they did have some sort of romantic spark, but my recollection is that the game makes clear whatever they felt was long since dead and buried well before the beginning of Suikoden V. Sialeeds' "behavior" being a response to the ending of that relationship is a pretty interesting idea, if that's what you're getting at... well, think of it this way: nothing in the story precludes the possibility.

    Again, I'm glad you enjoyed the story despite the lack of monogamy! I'm also thrilled you enjoyed Supplying Magic: I'm really surprised at the amount of positive feedback it received. Hopefully my future stories will be equally entertaining for you.
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  • From Watcher on December 23, 2009
    Well, yeah. I understood that it wouldn't have fit with the premise. I read the warning, I knew what I was getting into.

    I didn't mean for Gizel to show up, just that according to Suikosource they did feel something for each other, and I had thought that might have something to do with her... behavior.

    I read Supplying Magic some time ago, and enjoyed it immensely. It was nice, and I had never quite seen Jeane written that way before. It was enjoyable and fresh.
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  • From terpfen on December 22, 2009
    Watcher, thank you very much for your kind words. Would that certain others had your "live and let live" attitude about stories and characters that don't quite unfold to their expectations.

    About Gizel, he wouldn't really fit in this story for a few reasons. Foremost, I don't think he'd be able to get into the Sun Palace each and every night, nor do I think Sialeeds would be able to make the trip to Stormfist and back every night, so he doesn't fit into the premise. Second, as best as I can remember, there's nothing between Gizel and Sialeeds, and the game even outright states that on several occasions. (I could be wrong about this, but that's my recollection.) A more "likely" pairing would be Georg x Sialeeds, or even Kyle x Sialeeds, which I believe the game hints at having occurred the night before the Queen's Campaign. Third, a monogamous pairing wouldn't have resulted in the "action" you (and hopefully other readers) enjoyed. And lastly, he's just not one of my more favorite characters, so I wouldn't write him very well. It would also necessitate a replaying of Suikoden V to get the full range of his interactions with Sialeeds, and I wasn't prepared to do that just for a oneshot.

    That all said, if you're after a straight pairing, might I suggest my prior Suikoden story, Supplying Magic?
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  • From Watcher on December 22, 2009
    And here I was hoping for the answer to lie with Gizel Godwin. Ah well.

    Good story. I enjoyed it much more than the old Breath of Fire co-writing with Streti. Excellent "action," interesting narrative device, and a nice finish. Much as I prefer to read and ship monogamous couples, well done.
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