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Reviews for A Payment in Love

By : LuthienEllesar
  • From brainfear on November 08, 2010
    Great story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From xCubicZirconia on September 28, 2010
    Ok. I'm addicted to this story. I have a new favorite couple. You have to update soon or tell me if there is a sequel or something! I'm drawing a picture of this couple and sending it to you! *cuddles* Best fanfic EVER! omg!
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  • From ANON - Vilyawen on June 25, 2010
    This is a great story! More please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2010
    I'm not sure if you still check your reviews or if you continue to frequent this place under this alias, but I feel the need to point out just how delightful it is to read through this fanfic. It's incredibly well written, inspiring, and simply delicious in every manner of the word. Furthermore, I'm incredibly impressed by the fact that you wrote all of this via IM's with another person. Was each chapter a one-shot marathon between the two of you? That must've been intense. I can't imagine spending more than maybe a couple hours focusing on a roleplay in IM's. ;P

    Anyhow, I'd love to see more content from you. It's very rarely that I find something on here that I'm interested in, both for the smut and for the direction the characters and plot go in. Hell, I signed up just with the intentions of making this message.

    Cheers.
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  • From AvatarKny on March 05, 2010
    I do believe I'm going to have to look you up in game so I can congratulate you on the awesome writing there as well. I love it!

    wtb moar!
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  • From SeskiLexi on February 04, 2010
    I finally got a chance to catch up on your story. I love it, and simply adore the twins (both sets!). I also like how you were able to post your RP so seamlessly--I do the same thing with a few friends of mine, though we haven't posted any. Anyhow, keep up the excellent work. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From chedorii on January 14, 2010
    Dang you! What a cliff hanger this time, poor Ara can not stay out of trouble!! I can't wait to see the rest, and see what kind of baby everyone has. Love this story!!
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  • From Fawnheart on January 13, 2010
    Two more chapters, woo hoo! Enjoyable reading as always, I can't wait to see what kind of pups she throws hehe. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Weaves on January 11, 2010
    Hey all, thanks for the reviews, story is...little more than half done? The rp is finished, we have started a med/fan one now (Gamer will be posting it on literotica or something once we get further into it). I am sure you will all love the rest of the story, but I won't spoil it!

    And Railen is the shiz-nit.
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  • From Fawnheart on January 11, 2010
    Haha! yeah! Brilliant lol. I caught up. I really, REALLY enjoyed the Rosa/stabbing/confrontation/misunderstanding scene. I love the whole narky, evil cow belf characters. They crack me up. Again, I'm still amazed at how you have both managed to do this story. Especially that scene. The pacing was perfect and I was like *gasp* oh you BITCH hahahaha! Nice as. I await more updates with baited breath lol.
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  • From Fawnheart on January 11, 2010
    Aw.. thanks for the shout out! You made me blush lol.

    I've only read to chapter 3 so far but I had to review. First, what a pleasant surprise to find 6 chapters posted! I thought I could just come back ina week and there might be an update hahaha. Look, honestly, this story just has me absolutely fascinated. I've never seen rp before, and it's blowing me away to see all the actual story there is in amongst the smexy times. I'm enjoying this whole thing way too much for my own good and man... I'm smitten with the orcy Railen character, reow! ... and Ara too, she is just beautiful! (I love how he pulls her tail haha).

    I second the motion to hear some pally/tauren action lol. And how cute is Coleen? (I think I've spelled her name wrong). So is another person role playing her or do one of you do her too? This is just magic, this story and so cleverly done. I can't wait to read the rest of it so yeah, I'm off to do it now haha!
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  • From DeathGodDist on January 07, 2010
    Wow. This story is awesome! I really love the way you've pulled off the Orc/Dranei pairing. It's one kind I haven't seen much of, but this story has done a great job with it. Your characters are so very colorful and vibrant with their distinctive personalities. What you've done so far is just really well written, especially the steamy scenes. Big props for those! :)

    Hope there will be more to this tale. Wouldn't mind seeing what's the deal with that Human and Tauren who always seem to be hanging around as well.
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  • From chedorii on January 07, 2010
    I love this story so far!! I even made a character on your realm since you mentioned it! Her name is Cephora, and I have added Araminta to my friends. I really hope you post new chapters soon! The story has just the right mix of romance, fun, and sex to keep me interested. Can't wait for more!
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  • From Fawnheart on January 06, 2010
    "her tail practically started to vibrate she was so wound up" ... best line ever haha, brilliantly placed, just pure genius. I got a real kick out of that for some reason lol.

    What a fascinating piece to read. The difference between where you were writing (you played Ara, yeah?) and where your partner was writing was just brilliant! It satified a chick's need for the emotional detail and a guy's need for sensory detail and the different feel that each character got from their player/author made them even more authentic. Fantastic!

    Other than that, my orc fetish is re-affirmed hahaha. Yeah, more?
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  • From drizzler19 on January 06, 2010
    draenei/orc is probably my favorite cross faction love combo, and this story is ridiculously well written. looking forward to more of this and anything else you may write in the future.
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