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Reviews for The Infectious Lust of a Dalish Warden

By : guildmaster
  • From ANON - Silv&Alish on May 08, 2010
    Silvi: A lot of logic errors caused by limits of biology aside, an elf mating with a human produces a HUMAN in Dragon Age world (that's a quite well known fact if you read the books or just poke around the Internet)
    Alish: this is tiering just reading it
    Silvi: biological limits. and that penis must be the biggest thing in the world. *shudder*
    Alish: and they produce so many fluids I'm surprised they aren't dried out husks.

    This is a story that ignores biology all over, there are SO many things wrong here that I won't even bother mentioning more than 2: men come if they're inside and the woman comes. A penis that big would rip the elf apart. It's also almost rape.



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  • From Cross838 on April 17, 2010
    I'm surprised this is your first fanfiction, it is quite well done and the quality certainly hasn't diminished in this next chapter.

    I definitely enjoyed the focus on Leliana but I am a little disappointed with the casual dismissal of Morrigan. But that's just my preference. I am interested to see a bit of a focus on Morrigan in a later chapter.

    This was an extremely hot chapter. That it is one of the main characters that is being ravished by Arvlen makes it even better. That Leliana loses herself to Arvlen's tremendous manhood is exciting. Your ability to write interesting and non repetitive sex scenes is excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed the experience.

    Some images I particularly liked...

    Leliana remembering 'old wives' tales' about elven endowments...

    Leliana's memories of hearing Morrigan and Arvlen's coupling...the way neither of them hide their sounds of pleasure from the rest of the group, particularly the loud sound of their naked flesh slapping together is extremely hot.

    Leliana losing all control and demanding to be taken immediately like a wailing whore.

    It is a very hot story and I can't wait for your next chapter. The idea that you might be adding some none porn related story is welcome as well. I'm particularly interested in the mystery of Arvlen's condition. Is he marking his women in some sort of mystical harem? Has he bitten Morrigan?

    I hope to see more of the group's reactions to the way Arvlen takes Morrigan and Leliana regularly...


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  • From ANON - Xyuimen on April 15, 2010
    This story is awesome! WRite more! You are very good! Do one with Leliana AND Morigan! Dont know how that would work but I know you'd make it awesome!
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  • From ANON - Desert Punk on April 15, 2010
    Awesome new chapter! Really hot and sexy! Love that you chose Leliana for your new chappie. Can't wait for your Morrigan chapter! Keep it up! I've been waiting for this to update for a while!
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  • From Cross838 on February 10, 2010
    Great story! Hope to see more!

    Very entertaining and arousing. You're very descriptive and skilled at painting a picture. I love his exaggerated sexual characteristics. I like how your dalish elves also wear no undergarments. Could be completely unintentional but I like how it creates a bit of a continuity between our stories.

    This was really awesome and I hope to see more. I enjoyed this so much that its inspired me. Perhaps if I get some time off this weekend I'll write another story about my similarly enhanced warden.


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  • From Cross838 on February 10, 2010
    This story was extremely hot. Very well written.

    Loved it really. Hits all my buttons. Alpha male dominating with his huge ever virile cock. Awesome. I like how you made the darkspawn taint the cause as Morrigan mentions something about wardens to that effect in the game. I liked all the little details like how you mentioned Isabella. I liked how his coupling caused others to come together.

    Would love to see how Morrigan, Wynne, and Leliana respond to this warden.
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