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Reviews for Unexpected

By : gingermaya
  • From mancer on January 24, 2011
    I really liked your story! Definitely like that you did a three way (I totally would have while running through the game if I could have) and the match seems to be the perfect combination. Jack voyeuring was hot, and going back and looking at how the relationship developed (and the realistically imperfect dynamics) just feel so good. I hope you write more at some point! Kudos, and thanks for sharing your story!
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  • From Blackrain7557 on May 10, 2010
    Little late of a review, but it's an extremely good story, something that I hadn't thought of before now. Very well written and I like the bit in the first chapter with Jack. I don't know if you will continue this or not but overall it was a great story.
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  • From ANON - radikhal_ed on March 14, 2010
    Nice ending. I enjoyed this pairing. :) Never thought of it before, but you certainly convinced me enough.. haha. Wish there was a bit more closure at the end there, but overall good turn of events. Your descriptions of Thane were great. I feel like I know how he looks and feels now more than I did seeing him in ME2. o_o Funny that he had a jar of lube laying around. lol And YES for making him a dirty talker. Yes. Good work!
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  • From ANON - sucat on February 27, 2010
    The first chapter was delicious and gave me the warm-n-fuzzies as I saw Garrus and Thane interact in-game. The jealousy makes an interesting and believable dynamic in the story, especially with how Thane makes Garrus feel inadequate, and how he moved past it. I like how you wrote the characters and your Shepard.

    Crit:
    I think you need a bit of practice to catch Mordin's speech pattern, or switch him with Dr. Chakwas as hers is normal and she also knows alien physiology. The "submissive" bit of drell culture seems a bit over-the-top, unnecessary drama, but will see how you run with it.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on February 26, 2010
    I'm glad that you gave us all that background information on how this arrangement between the three of them began.

    And, do my eyes deceive me or does it look like we might get a nice scene between Thane and Garrus? Well, while the cat's away...

    Nice job. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on February 21, 2010
    :3 I'm very glad that you decided to continue. And I loved Garrus' initial jelousy of Thane; it made me squee.

    And now I'm curious to see what Garrus will do with Thane since he's now are of the whole submissive/dominat Drell culture. Perhaps, give Thane a chance to be on top. *Wiggles eyebrows*

    I can't wait to see more. Thanks again for continuing.
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  • From ANON - Elena on February 18, 2010
    I'm glad you decided to share this xDDDD ¿What about a second chapter? hehehe
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  • From ANON - AliceInWonderland on February 18, 2010
    I second the reviewer before me - it would be amazing if you wrote more of these tree. :g

    Yours are among the very few well-written explicit stuff I've read (and not just in this fandom), so thanks dearly for writing and hope to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - 10tealeaf on February 17, 2010
    lmao that was sooooo unexpected! and they knew! they knew!
    evil evil >:|
    now how will i look at my threesome team innocently now?
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  • From Rockinmuffin on February 17, 2010
    That was really, REALLY hot. I've always been a big fan of the Fem!Shep x Garrus pairing, and Fem!Shep x Thane is pretty high up on the list too, but all three of them together? Well, consider my mind BLOWN.

    It would be awesome if you decided to write more about these three in the future. ;3

    Also, Jack's voyeurism was amuzing. SHE DID IT FOR THE LULZ. :D
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